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The topic sentence is the most important part of your paragraph. It is often the very first sentence. It has to be clear and to express the main idea.

Be careful!
There are many common mistakes you can make when creating a topic sentence. You should avoid the use of:

  • Facts
    When you use facts, it is hard to develop the topic further since it is too specific.

  • Too general idea
    It is also hard to continue your idea if you have too many things to talk about in only one paragraph.

  • Announcing the topic
    Go straight to the topic. You do not need to announce everything you are going to write about.

An example of a TOPIC SENTENCE:
I love bananas because they are convenient, delicious, and nutritious.

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I love to travel because it is an incredible experience,I can learn a lot about culture, religion, local food and geography

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Paragraph Structure

We can compare a paragraph to a sandwick. It has different layers, but in the paragraph, these layers are the sentences. In a basic paragraph, there are three different types of a sentences.

  • Topic sentence
  • Supporting sentences
  • Concluding sentence

Clear topic + Main idea

I love bananas because they are convenient, delicious, and nutritious.

What to avoid

  • Facts: One out of ten people doesn’t eat fruits.
  • Too general idea: Fruits are good.
  • Announcing the topic: In this paragraph I am going to talk about fruits.

My favorite sport is the soccer. The soccer you can play with many person, friends, family or unknown. You can play It only with a ball you don’t need any more

I love the album of Blackpink, the songs are incredibles, pretty and yours videos are very exciting.

This image helped me to better understand the subject.
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Doing exercise is very important for health, there are a lot of ways to do it.

Your digital information is the most valuable asset over the Internet.

My fovorite architecture of deep learning are the recurrent neural networks(RNN). The RNN is very powerful . You can use in traduction of texts, generation of texts for chatbots and predict value of market.

The town of Taganga, which is located near to Santa Marta, Colombia, is one of the most spectacular places to dive open water.

I love to travel because I like to meet new people and practicing english when I visit some countries. Also I enjoy to learn about others cultures and try their gastronomy.

I read one piece because it is funny, sad, and interesting.

Topic sentence
CLEAR TOPIC + MAIN IDEA
I love bananas because they are
convenient, delicious, and nutritious.

`Implementing machine learning algorithms in manufacturing processes can significantly increase production efficiency by automating complex tasks and reducing human error.`

The cinnamon rolls are my favorite dessert; they have cinnamon powder, brown sugar that makes them fluffy.

I recently adopted a Husky dog, and I’m discovering that I love its character. They are lovely, stubborn, and independent dogs with endless energy. It has been a beautiful experience to care for it.

My activity of this class.
I like to learn languages because its so important when you want to get a job.

I like listening to BTS songs, each member has a magnificent voice, they prepare impressive choreographies and there are seven boys who fill us with joy when listening to their voices.

I enjoy studying about construction because I can learn about it in any part of the world.

Well, i like to drawing becasue i can express all feeelings. The drawing is a good therapy for let free the ideas. I prefer to drawing anatomy othan landscape, because its easier and i love the gesture, faces, poses and activities of the humans.

I love watching the series “Friends” in the original language because there is ample vocabulary for everyday situations and common phrases.

In my free time, I like to draw. It’s a creative way to express whatever is on your mind. such as emotions, ideas or to clear your head. Because, drawing is not only to make art but also to distract yourselft from everithing that worries you.

My favorite music band is Linkin Park, I’ve been their fan since I was eleven years old. I like their music, you can also learn vocabulary with their songs and improve your pronunciation when you sing them.

I practice volleyball and I like it! This is a sport to be healthy and share with many people.

People should have more leisure time, since this might allow them to spend more time with their families and with other important things in life like university, and personal projects.

I love a cats, because they are independents, but in the same time they need us, and then are so lovely

I love punk hardcore because it’s a very powerful music, it has lyrics of hard situations and positive messages in some ocassions allowing a constructive violence

Suffering from burnout is something I never thought could happen to me until two weeks ago.

Topic _ Cakes

There are a differents types of cakes, for their flavours, colors and size, but always they will convert in a magic moment, a birthday, wedding or simply a dessert.

Doing sports is healthier than other activities that should be tired because sports make you stronger, flexible, fast, and improve your metabolism.
I would like to know what it's real, if you talk about what can you feel, smell , taste and see, then the real are simple electric signals interpreted by your brain.
I'm learning to play guitar, and I'm studying music theory.
I love books. They are fun, entertaining, and have amazing stories.
I love cycling because it is a healthy sport, burns calories and strengthens my legs.
Hi everyone! I love English because it is a universal language and it improves my professional profile.
I love gardening. Plants improve the environment and make it more beautiful.
I like drink coffe: because it keeps me awake, and it's delicious
I love Software Engineering because it helps to solve difficult problems
I really like the futbol because is it a passions, culture and exciting sport.
***I love study in platzi, becose is a plataform with a quality contect incredible, and also i can watch it when i want.***
MAIN IDEA = CATS I love cats because they are social, independent, sleepyheads, and so cute.
Homework: Choose a topic and write a topic sentence I need you to help me solve the chemistry problem. I don't understand the balancing of the equation and how to form the compound
Topic Sentence: The topic sentence is the most important part of your paragraph, and it's normally the first sentence you write A good topic sentence contains a clear topic and a main idea The topic sentence is the most important part of paragraph. It is often the very first sentence. It has to be clear and to express the main idea Be carefull: There are many common mistakes you can make when creating a topic sentence. You should avoid the use of: Facts: When you use facts, it is hard to developed the topic further since it is too specific Too general idea: It is also hard to continue your idea if you have too many things to talk about in only one paragraph Announcing the topic: Go straight to the topic. You do not need to announce every thing you are going to write about
I like the cars, are very beatiful, fast and I can drive them
I like to play video games because it relaxes, amuses, and entertains me.
Eating well and staying healthy is very important. You can avoid a lot of illnesses like hypertension, diabetes, obesity, malnutrition, etc.
Second language learning is best done if you use full input material. Booklets with filling exercises can be helpful to practice and to test the student's knowledge in grammar, but there are several aspects outside knowing the syntax. Getting exposed to full texts, audio or video can help students know better about how native speakers (or even non-native ones) use the language, the customs, formal or informal ways of communication, among other aspects.
I think that Messi is the best football player, because he masters all the stages of the game.
I love gastronomy because you can learn, get to know and appreciate different cultures.
I love listening to music because you can feel and hear the rhythm, the lyrics and the feelings that the artist wants to emit.
I love my job, i can to work comfortably and managing my schedules from home, this give me posibily to travel at the close future :)
I love soccer because it is exciting, competitive, and universal.
My favorite pets are cats, they are very smart, funny and cute, i recommend to all of you adopt a cat.
I like the cinema, because it's a place when you can see beautifull movie and the imagination leaving of us mind
I enjoy to share my time because I feel growing up in a lot aspect of my life when can learned more about their others expirience
I love cats because they are elegants, independents and cutes.
I love dance, because makes my heart happy and it relaxes me.
I like to play soccer because is a great activity to keep healthy and is so fun.
my almost true love for the tecnology, its important in the life the love but my love is inusual because its an action or progress in a science, its love because i feel happy and glad to see the amzing future to come.
I love to play soccer, when I was younger, I went to the park every day and play soccer until that my parents called me for eat or for sleep.
**I like to make music.** Because it is the way I have to express my feelings and at the same time generate indescribable sensations in people.
I like eat apples because give me more energy in the morning.

I USUALLY LOVE GOING TO TECHNO MUSIC EVENTS BUT I LOVE IT EVEN MORE WHEN I PLAY IT ON MY CONTROLLER.

* The topic sentence is the main idea. * I love bananas because they are convenient, delicious, and nutritious.
I like classical music because it reduces stress, boosts mood, improves creativity and enhances memory.
Running is a incredible way to be fit and take care of your mental health.
I like to  play soccer because it is one of the most popular sports in the world, and it helps generate work in the team.

God is love and He gave his son as a sacrifice atonement for our sins, and through JesuChrist we can get closer to our Father in heaven as a son and clamour ABBA Father. first of all, The Word of God says that God is love and who loves everyone, that one loves God, because of his immeasurable love, He gave his only con for us, and this is why we can have fellowship with God as a Father.

God is love and He gave his son as a sacrifice atonement for our sins, and through JesuChrist we can get closer to our Father in heaven as a son and clamour ABBA Father.

i love photograpy because it shows us the beauty of nature, animals, people, and their cultures, I am drawn to photography as an art form that reveals the diversity and magnificence of our world.
I love practicing boxing because it is a great sport that brings discipline, perseverance, and health.
The exercise is good, as a result we have a muscular and healthy body.
I like rice because it's cheap, goes with everything, and is delicious on its own.
I like to do exercise because is good for your health, you stay fit and active.
I really like to watch anime because it's a nice chance to know about Japanese culture.
My favorite series is Black Mirror because it is a disruptive and futuristic series. This series has 6 seasons.
I don't smoke because it's bad for my health and bad for my family.
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I love going to the stadium because it is an incredible experience, and full of emotions.

“Photography is my favorite hobby because I can capture unique moments. When I take photos, I lose track of time, and my mind becomes creative.”

I like to study because It is good for my mental health.

My favorite movies I love to see movies at nigth. I Prefer romantic, comedy and suspense. I can to see it all the nigth
I like to travel a lot, i would like visit Canada, London and Paris.
I like using my cellphone because it helps me do many things, and it's amazing how everything is so easy to accomplish.
Learning something every day helps you to improve your skills and it helps to achieve your goals.
I like road my bike, The bikes are great, good for health and very funny.

I like cats because they are so independent and clean

Jeans are my favorite because they are comfortable, easy to wear, and nice.

I like to read because it is entertaining, motivates the imagination and improves spelling

My practice:
I love fencing because it is a very elegant sport that reduces stress, increases mental agility, and enhances coordination and balance.

It is good for your health to do sports, my favorite is swimming

I really like to eat sushi on Friday nights, It’s my favorite plan to start the weekend.

the K-dramas are espectacular because have more drama, romanticism, and teh actors are the better

I LOVE THE SERIES BACAUSE I FEEL A ROLLER COASTER OF FELLING, I LOVE IT SO MUCH.

I like to design interfaces because I have experience creating web pages, mobile apps, wireframes and prototypes.

I enjoy playing the game Minecraft because it allows me to create a world where the only limit is my imagination, as well as the battery life of my phone." ⛏🧱

English is very important, because it is the door to a world of better job opportunities.

One of the best ways to learn English is through Platzi

What to avoid

Facts:
One out of ten people doesn’t eat fruit.

Too general ideas:
Fruits are good.

Announcing the topic:
In this paragraph I am going to talk about fruits.

Shooting movies is a wonderful experience. For a especific time, you experience different stories and possibilities. Also, you get to meet new people and visit different places.