Escritura en Inglés

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Estructura de Oraciones y Párrafos Básicos

Fundamentos de la escritura en Inglés

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Reglas de Capitalización, Abreviaturas y Sangría en Escritura

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Uso correcto de signos de puntuación en escritura

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Etapas del Proceso de Escritura: De la Preescritura a la Publicación

Quiz: Fundamentos de la escritura en Inglés

Elementos de una oración en Inglés

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Tipos de Oraciones en Inglés: Declarativa, Imperativa, Interrogativa, Exclamativa

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Partes del habla: categorías y ejemplos en inglés

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Combinación de Cláusulas Independientes en Inglés Básico

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Tipos y Usos de Conectores en Inglés

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Uso de la Estructura Paralela en Oraciones en Inglés

Quiz: Elementos de una oración en Inglés

Elementos de un párrafo en Inglés

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Estructura del párrafo: oraciones principales y de apoyo

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Escribir frases temáticas efectivas para párrafos claros

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Escritura de Oraciones Complementarias en Párrafos

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Escribir oraciones finales efectivas en párrafos

Quiz: Elementos de un párrafo en Inglés

Escritura de Diversos tipos de Textos en Inglés

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Escribiendo tu Perfil Personal: Guía Práctica

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Uso de Adjetivos en Inglés para Describir Personas y Lugares

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Describir rutinas usando adverbios y conectores en inglés

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Escribir una Biografía de un Artista

Quiz: Escritura de Diversos tipos de Textos en Inglés

Escritura de un correo electrónico en Inglés

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Correos Electrónicos Informales: Estructura y Ejemplos

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Estructura y Redacción de Correos Electrónicos Formales

Quiz: Escritura de un correo electrónico en Inglés

Desarrolla tu "writing" en Inglés

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Escribir una Reseña de Película o Programa de Televisión

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Etapas de Escritura para Aprender Inglés Efectivamente

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We write a formal email in more formal situations. You write a formal email when the message requires formality: when we exchange emails at work, apply for a job, or when the email is to a person you do not know.

Different from an informal email, you should not use contractions. Also, the vocabulary needs to agree with the type of message you want to convey.

The formal email also has a simple structure:

  • Beginning: the greeting (using titles) and your opening statement.

  • Middle: explain the reason for your email.

  • End: the closing message and your first and last name.

Example of a formal email (with mistakes) for you to rewrite:

Hello Mr. John,
How are you? Thanks for this opportunity. It’s amazing.

I’m writing to confirm our meeting tomorrow night. Is it ok at 8 pm? I’m gonna be available only after this time ‘cause I have some other stuff to do.

Talk to you soon.
Bye,
Leonardo.

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Subject: New Member on the team
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Greetings Team
.
I am pleased to introduce you to Ángel who is starting today as a Designer. He will be providing technical support and assistance to our web app, making sure they enjoy the best experience with the design and UI/UX.

Feel free to greet Angel in person and congratulate him on the new role!
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Kind regards, Brandon Argel Verdeja Domínguez.

Dear Mr. John,
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I appreciate your reply.
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I am sending this email to confirm our meeting tomorrow night. I will be available after 8 pm, so please advise if that hour fits your schedule too.
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Cordially,
.
Gil Prado Mendoza

email address : To: [email protected]
subject : RE: Interview
greeting: Dear Mr. Smith,
opening: Thank you for the quick response.
purpose: I am writing back to you to confirm the day and
time for the interview.
I am available on January 22nd, at 2 pm.
closing: I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best regards,
complete name: Judy Jones

Dear Mr. Smith.
I hope so you are well.

I am writing back to thank you for this opportunity and confirm our meeting tomorrow night. If you not have any inconvenience, I’m available after at 8pm.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Regards,
Leonardo Di Caprio.

Email address: [email protected]
RE: BOX SENT

Mrs. Carolina,

I hope you are fine.

This morning I received the box sent the last week, everything it’s ok.

Thanks for your support.

Regards,

Michelle Fung

To: [email protected]
RE: Interview

Dear Mr. John,
Thank you for the quick response.

I am writing to confirm our meeting tomorrow night. Is it ok at 8 pm? I am going to be available only after this time because I have some other stuff to do.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Best regards,
Marlón Cuartas.

Example of a formal email (with mistakes) for you to rewrite:
Dear Mr. John,
Thanks for this opportunity. It is amazing.
I am writing to confirm our meeting tomorrow night. I am available at 8:00pm.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Regards,
Leonardo Lopez

to: [email protected]
subject: budget

Dear Mr. Mysterycustomer,

Thank you for getting in touch.

I am writing back to you to sending the budget you have requested.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Best regards,
Judy Jones.

To: [email protected]

Hello Miss Maria C.
How are you? Thanks for this experience, It is wonderful for me

Subject: Meet to the photoshoot

I am sending this email to ask you where is the place for the photoshoot and at what time is it.

Talk to you soon
Bye, Good day
Anna Maria Garzon Muñoz.

Email: [email protected]
Subject: Rent an apartment at Cartagena.

Dear Ms. Rodriguez

I hope all is well, I have seen your post on Airbnb regarding rent of the apartment at Cartagena, we want to know availability ​of days between 4th and 12th of January.

Let me know your answers or any questions.

Regards,

Catalina Escobar.

Subject: Confirmation

Dear Mr. Show

I’m writting back to you to confirm the online meeting for the next week It will be on Wednesday, at 5 pm.

Best regards,

Joao

Formal Email
To: [email protected]
Subject: Final Interview
Dear Santiago,

I am sending this email to confirm the final interview next Monday at 8:30 am. I appreciate the opportunity. Finally, I am the perfect candidate for this position because I have a lot of experience with customer service and administrative tasks.

Cordially,
Samanda Verbel

Hello Mr. Ruvalcaba
How are you? Thanks for this opportunity, it´s amazing.

I´m writing to confirm our dinner tommorrow nigth to talk about our future bisiness. Is it ok at 9 pm? I´m gonna be aviable only after this time because i have some other stuff to do.

see you soon
bye.
Brad

Activity

Dear Mr. John,
Thank you for this opportunity. It’s amazing.
I am sending this email to confirm our meeting tomorrow night. Is it okay at 8 pm? I am gonna be available only after this time because I have some other stuff to do.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Regards, Leonardo Guevara.

Dear Mr. White,
Thank you for the opportunity.
The reason I send this email is to confirm the time for our meeting tomorrow night. I am available after 8 pm.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Cordially,
Leonardo Guzman

To: [email protected]

Subject:

Dear Ms. Future Client,

Thank you for taking my last call.

I am writing to you to send the shipment quote according to the information that was provided to me.

I am attentive to any questions or clarifications

Kind regards

Mauricio Coronado

❤️

To: [email protected]
RE: Meeting
Dear Mr. John,

Thank you for this opportunity.
I am writing to confirm our meeting tomorrow night.
Is it ok at 8 pm? I am available at the time you indicate.

See you soon.
Leonardo.

To: my [email protected]
RE: Interview
Dear Mr. John,

Thanks for this opportunity, It is amazing.

I’m writing to confirm our meeting tomorrow night. Is it ok at 8 pm? I’m going to be available only after this time ‘cause I have some other stuff to do.

Best Hope
Leonardo sillvestre

To: [email protected]
Subject: Confirmation of our meeting
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Dear Mr. John,
Thank You for this opportunity. It is amazing.
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I am writing to confirm our meeting tomorrow night. Is it ok at 8 pm? I am gonna be available only after this time ‘cause I have some other stuff to do.
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I look forward to hearing from you.
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Cordially,
Leonardo.

Dear Mr. John,

I would like to thank you for this opportunity, as I would like to be a part of your company´s personnel.
I am writing in connection to the meeting we have tomorrow because I have a personal issue, therefore, I would like to ask if we could change the hour of the appointment to 8 pm.

I await your prompt response.

Yours faithfully,
Valentina Hernandez

EXERCISE

Dear Mr. John,
Thanks for this opportunity.

The reason this letter is for confirm our meeting tomorrow nigth. I will be at 8 pm.

Thank for your atention, regards,

Juan Pablo Cabero.

To: [email protected]
RE: Interview

Hello Mr. Smith
I appreciate your response
I am writing to you to confirm the meeting of tomorrow, I am available after at 5:00pm
I look forward to hearing from you soon
Best regards,
Meyvis Hernandez

To: <[email protected]> RE: Meet Dear Mr. John, Thank you for the quick response. I am writing back to you to confirm the day and time for the meeting. I am available tomorrow, at 8 pm. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards, Leonardo Stevenson.

Subject: New contract

Dear Mr. Goldfinger

Thank you for the opportunity to discuss the terms of the new contract.

The reason I am sending you this email is to inform you that our board of directors has agreed to the terms of the contract with your company.

We are very pleased with the expansion of our business partnership.

I look forward to seeing you soon.

Cordially
Mr. Silver Spound

“FORMAL EMAIL”

Hello Mr. John,
Thanks for this opportunity. It’s amazing.

I am writing to confirm our meeting tomorrow in the night. Is it ok at 8 pm?, I am gonna be available only after this time, because I have some other stuff to do.

Talk to you soon.
Leonardo Castro

Dear Mr. John,

Thank you for this opportunity.

I am writing back to you to confirm the day and
time for the interview.
I am available on February 24th, at 8 pm.
I am gonna be available only after this time because I have some other stuff to do.

I look forward to hearing from you
Cordially,

Leonardo Capelli

Dear, Mr. John
Thanks for this opportunity. It is amazing.
.
I am writing to confirm our meeting tomorrow night. Is it ok at 8 p.m.? I am going to be available after this hour. I wait for your answer to coordinate the place.
.
I look forward to communicating with you soon.
Regards,
Leonardo Danubio Valencia.

Dear, Mr. John,

Thank you for this opportunity.

I am writing to confirm our meeting tomorrow night. Is it okay at 08:00pm? I am going to be available only after this time because I have some errands to run before. Please let me know if this hour fits with your schedule too.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely,
Vienna Saenz.

Dear Mr. Hills,
Thank you for give me a chance to have a meeting with you.
I am sending this email to confirm the day and hour of our meeting. I am available on October 19th, at 8 pm. Please, let me know if it is good time for you.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Best regards,
Leonardo Travieso.

To: [email protected]
New portfolio Update
Dear Peter Schift
I’m glad to write to you about our new great portfolio perfomance
We achieved a great perfomance during the second quarter of the year, and we can offer our clients with the best perfomance for our mutual fund and ETF services.
If you want to analyse the report I have written please contact me and I gladly will explain every single movement…

Best Wishes
Fernando Orozco

Subject: New Member on the team
.
Greetings Team
.
I am pleased to introduce you to Ángel who is starting today as a Designer. He will be providing technical support and assistance to our web app, making sure they enjoy the best experience with the design and UI/UX.

Feel free to greet Angel in person and congratulate him on the new role!
.
Kind regards, Brandon Argel Verdeja Domínguez.

To: [email protected]
RE: The course Introduction to Terminal and Commands are too focus on Linux.

Dear Platzi team

Thank you for your attention.

I am sending this e-mail because I was a little confused with the course Introduction to Terminal and Commands. It is too focus on Linux and I have a computer with Windows, so I can not understand too much the topics.
I am wondering if there is another course more focus to Windows with the same topics that I can take.

Cordially,
Juan Diego Vergel

To: [email protected]
RE: Interview
Dear Ing. Sergio
Thank you for take my phonecall.
I´m writing to you to confirm our appointment for tomorrow in you office.
I will be there at 12:00 pm.

Best regards,
Pablo Mariscal

Dear Mr. John,
I am writing back to you to confirm our meeting tomorrow night. I am available at 8 pm.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerelly,
Rocío Merino

To: [email protected]
RE: Interview
Dear Mr. John
Thank you for this opportunity

I’m writing confirm our meeting tomorrow night. Is at 8 pm. I will be puntual.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best regards
Martin Suin Encalada

To: [email protected]
RE: Interview for job aplication

Dear Mr. John,

Thank you for your interest. The reason I send this email is to confirm our interview tomorrow at 8 PM.

Regards,
Jocelyn Ramírez López.

[email protected]
confirming attendance
Dear Mr Duran.
Thank you for the quick response. I am grateful for being selected and being being part of this company.
I will be there without fail at time and date indicate.
Talk to you soon
regards
Diana Clabel

To: [email protected]

interview

Dear Mr. Vega,

Thank you for the quick response.

I am writing back to you to confirm the day and time for the interview.
I am available on January 22nd at 2 pm.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best regards,
Judy Jones.

Dear Mr. Smith,

Thank you for the opportunity of sharing my ideas.

I am writing to confirm our meeting tomorrow night, I am going to be available after 8 pm.

Best regards,

Leonardo.

Subject: Petition curse.

Greetings team Platzi

I’am love learn in your platform , but i’m recomend one course , the course name is 'Course of writing emails '.

Best regards.
Wilbert Navarrete

Dear Mr. Cevallos
I hope so you are well.
I am writing back to thank you for this opportunity and confirm our meeting tomorrow night. If you not have any inconvenience, I’m available after at 8pm.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Regards,
Pancho

To: [email protected]

RE: Meeting

Dear Miss Parra.

I appreciate your attention.

I am writing to confirm the meeting the day Saturday 24th, at 3pm. On America street.

I hope to see you soon.

Best regards,
Andres Paredes.

Good afternoon Mirella

How are you? Thank you for this opportunity. I feel grateful

I am writing to confirm our meeting next week. Is it okay at 5 pm? I have a class before, so I think that schedule is more viable for me.

Talk to you soon,
Sincerely,
Shirley Sosa

Dear Mr. John.
Thank you for the oportumity

I am writing back to you to confirm our meeting for tomorrow, at 2:00 p.m.

I am hoping see you tomorrow

Best regards
Amelia Fermopolis

Dear Mr. Arenas
Tanks you for the quick response.
I am writing back to you to confirm the day and time on the visit in the Patitlan’s Bus station.
I am available on July 12nd, at 12 pm

I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best regards
Julio Paz

TO: [email protected]

RE: Interview

For my part I would like to say that with platzi it is very useful for me to know many things in order to reinforce my previous knowledge, in my school they taught me many things but with platzi they show me an expansion on the subject that I did not know, this platform really helped many people and their classes

I hope I can continue learning with her until I can be an audio visual engineer

Best regards,
sergio alexander barrera esteban

Dear Mr. John.

Thank you for this opportunity.

I am sending this email to confirm our meeting. I am avalaible tomorrow at 8 pm.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best regards,
James Bond

# Writing Formal Emails: Class Summary and Guidelines This article presents a comprehensive summary of the second class in the email writing module, which focuses on **formal emails**. The class explains when to use formal emails, how to structure them properly, and provides an example to guide students in writing their own formal messages. ## 📩 What is a Formal Email? ### When to Use a Formal Email A **formal email** is appropriate in situations where **professionalism** and **respectful tone** are required. Common scenarios include: * **Workplace communication** * **Job applications** * **Emails to people you don’t know** * **Business correspondence** ### Key Characteristics of Formal Emails: * Use **titles and last names** (e.g., *Mr. Smith*, *Dr. Lee*) * Avoid **contractions** (e.g., write *do not* instead of *don’t*) * Maintain a **polite and respectful tone** * Follow a **clear and organized structure** ## 📝 Structure of a Formal Email Formal emails have a **three-part structure**: **Beginning**, **Middle**, and **End**. ### 1. **Beginning: Greeting and Opening Statement** Start with a formal greeting and a polite introductory remark. #### Recommendations: * **Greeting format**: * *Dear Mr. \[Last Name]* * *Dear Ms. \[Last Name]* * **Opening statement**: * Politely thank the recipient. * Example: *Thank you for your time* or *I appreciate your quick response.* ### 2. **Middle: Stating the Purpose** The middle section contains the main message or request. #### Examples: * *I am writing to schedule an interview for the position we discussed.* * *I would like to confirm the details of our upcoming meeting.* This part should be **clear, concise**, and **to the point**. ### 3. **End: Closing and Sign-Off** End the email with a polite closing and your full name. #### Appropriate closings: * *I look forward to hearing from you soon.* * *Thank you for your consideration.* * *Best regards,* *\[Your Full Name]* ## 📧 Formal Email Example: Jude Jones The class presented a formal email example written by **Jude Jones** to her **future boss**. Here's a breakdown of her email's structure: * **Recipient's Email**: Addressed correctly * **Subject**: Clear and relevant to the email’s purpose * **Greeting**: *Dear Mr. Smith* — uses a title and last name * **Opening Statement**: *Thank you for the quick response.* * **Middle Section**: Jude explains the purpose — **scheduling a job interview** * **Closing**: *I look forward to hearing from you soon.* * **Sign-Off**: *Best regards,* followed by **Jude Jones** * **Language Style**: No contractions used (e.g., *I am* instead of *I’m*) ## 🧰 Class Resources and Activity ### Resources Provided: * 📄 **Example Email**: Jude Jones’ correct formal email is available for reference. * 🗒️ **Useful Expressions**: A list of formal phrases for greetings and closings. * ⚠️ **Error-Filled Example**: Found in the class description—this is part of the activity. ### Class Activity: * Review the **incorrect formal email example** provided. * **Rewrite** the email using the correct **formal email structure and style** taught in class. ## ✅ Conclusion This class introduces the essential elements of writing a professional and effective formal email. Students learned the difference in tone and structure compared to informal emails, and how to convey a message respectfully and clearly. ### Key Takeaways: * Use **formal greetings and closings** with titles and last names. * Avoid **contractions** to maintain a professional tone. * Follow the **three-part structure**: Greeting → Purpose → Closing. * Sign with your **full name**. * Utilize the **example email** and provided expressions as reference tools. Complete the class activity by editing the flawed formal email, and apply your knowledge in real-life formal writing scenarios. See you next class! 🖋️💼
Dear Mr. John, Thank you for the opportunity. I am writting you to confirm the day and time for our meeting. I am available tomorrow at 8:00pm. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards, Leonardo Rodriguez
Hello, Mr. Platzi. Good afternoon. I hope you are well. All the things you do for this community is very appreciated. Thanks you, Javier.
Hello Mr. John, Thanks for this opportunity. I am writing to confirm our meeting tomorrow night. I am available at 8 pm. Thank you for your time. Kindly, Leonardo.
To: <[email protected]> Good morning talent recruiter, I'm assisting with you to find out how to application process is going and to receive any feedback if needed. In case there is a unsatisfactory feedback, I will be providing you with some of the parts to consider. Thanks Support Recruiter
To: <[email protected]> RE: Medical Exams Dear Mr. Brandon, Thank you for complete de hiring process. I have attach my medical exams requirets to complete the process, I’m ready to sign the contract. By the way, I have read every document and I agree with everything. I look forward to hearing from you Cordially, Daniel Ospina
Corrected formal email example To: <[email protected]> RE: Meeting Dear Mr. John, Thank you for the quick response. I am writing back to you to confirm the day and time for the meeting. I am available tomorrow at 8 pm. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards, Leonardo Di Caprio.
To: <[email protected]> Subject: Request to schedule a Meeting Dear Mr. Samuel. I hope this message finds you well I am writing to request scheduling our next meeting for Monday and Friday at 11 am. Please let me know if this time works for you. Looking forward to your confirmation. Best Regards. Kris
Formal and informal emails serve different purposes and have distinct characteristics: 1. **Tone**: Formal emails maintain a professional tone; informal emails are casual and friendly. 2. **Salutation**: Formal greetings use titles (e.g., "Dear Mr. Smith"), while informal ones may use first names or casual phrases (e.g., "Hi John"). 3. **Structure**: Formal emails follow a clear structure with a greeting, body, and closing. Informal emails may be more free-form. 4. **Language**: Formal emails avoid contractions and slang; informal emails can use colloquial language. Understanding these differences is essential for effective communication based on the context.
The structure of a formal email includes the following key components: 1. **Subject Line**: Clearly state the purpose of your email. 2. **Salutation**: Use appropriate titles and the recipient's last name (e.g., "Dear Mr. Smith"). 3. **Opening Statement**: Thank the recipient for their time or previous correspondence. 4. **Body**: Clearly express the purpose of your email, providing necessary details. 5. **Closing Statement**: Summarize your expectations or next steps (e.g., "I look forward to hearing from you"). 6. **Sign-off**: Use a formal closing (e.g., "Best regards") followed by your full name. Make sure to avoid contractions and maintain a professional tone throughout.
Mr. John, Thank you for this opportunity. It's amazing. I am sending this email to confirm our meeting tomorrow for the night. Is it ok at 8 pm? I'm gonna be available only after this time ‘cause I have some other stuff to do. I look forward to hearing from you Cordially, Leonardo Montenegro.
Dear Mr. John, Thank you for this opportunity I am writing to to confirm our meeting tomorrow at 8:00 pm. I Will be available from 8:00 pm I look forward to hear your confirmation soon Best regards Michael Morales Hurtado
To: <[email protected]> RE: Interview Dear Mr. John, Thank you for the quick response. I am writing to confirm our meeting tomorrow night. I am available after 8, could you please confirm if there would be any inconvenience. I look forward to hearing from your soon. Best regards, Kristhian Lizcano
Formal email: Dear Mr. John, Thank you for this opportunity. I am writing to confirm our meeting tomorrow night. I am available at 8:00 p.m. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Cordially, Saul Monroy
**Subject:** Confirmation of Our Meeting Dear Mr. John, I hope this message finds you well. Thank you for this opportunity; it is truly appreciated. I am writing to confirm our meeting scheduled for tomorrow evening. Would 8:00 PM work for you? Unfortunately, I will only be available after this time due to prior commitments. Looking forward to hearing from you. Best regards, Leonardo
To: <[email protected]> Subject: Hiring Interview. Dear Mrs. Jane Johnstone, Thank you for your timely response. I am writing to confirm the scheduled data and time for the interview. I can confirm my availability on December 16th at 8:00 AM. I look forward to your response. Best regards, César Sánchez.
Here is my answer for the activity: To: <[email protected]> RE: Interview Dear Mr. Jhon, Thank you for the quick response. I am writing back to you to confirm the day and time for the interview. I will be available tomorrow at 8:00 pm as I have a family commitment in the afternoon. Thank you for your understanding, and I look forward to your response Best regards, Epaminondas Chipatecua
Fixed: To: [email protected] Re: Meeting Dear Mr. Díaz, Thanks You for the quick response. I am writing to confirm our Meeting . I am available tomorrow, March 23rd, at 8 pm. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards Leonardo Vargas.
To: <[email protected]> RE: Report Dear Mr. Boss, Thank you for the quick response. I am finishing the details of the weekly report. It will be finished at 2 pm. Best regards, Vicente.
Corrected formal email To:[email protected] Re: Interview Subject: Confirmation of meeting Dear Mr. John Thanks for this opportunity I writing to confirm our meeting tomorrow night at 8 pm Talk to you son Best regards Leonardo Gomez
<[email protected]> Thanks you for your time. This email is to explain my absence from your class. I am sick and have a terrible migraine. The next weekend, I will attend classes. I look forward to hearing from you. Erika Paez.
To: <[email protected]> Subject: Interview Greeting: Dear Mr. Vales, Opening: I hope you are fine. Purpose: I am sending you this email because I would like to work in your company. This is my Curriculum Vitae, I attach the required certificates. Closing: I look forward to hearing from you soon. Complete name: Best regards,  Luis Bados
To: <[email protected]> RE: Interview **Subject:** Confirmation of Meeting Dear Mr. John, Thank you for giving me this opportunity. I am writing to confirm the meeting date. I am available tomorrow after 8 p.m. I look forward to hearing from you. Cordially, Leonardo Vincas
Dear Mr. John, Thanks for this opportunity. It is amazing. I am writing to confirm our meeting tomorrow night. Is it ok at 8 am? I am gonna be available only after this time cause I have some after stuff to do. Talk to you soon. Good bye, Leonar Florez
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The "wrong" exercise uses an approach that is more suitable for informal letters. "How are you?" feels more suitable for writing a friend or relative, while the "it's amazing" brings nothing when the letter already thanks the recipient for the interview opportunity. Also, contractions are better avoided in any formal or technical written piece. In the next paragraph, it'd be best to avoid using ok. I would advise using would as an auxiliary."'Cause" or "stuff to do" are too colloquial. The "talk to you soon" isn't terrible, but more suitable for informal contexts.
TO: \*\*\*\*\*\* RE:Meeting. Dear Mr. Jhon Thank you for this opportunity and for your answer. I am writing this email to confirm our meeting tomorrow, I would like to know if it is possible to meet at 8: 00 pm. I look forward to hearing from you soon Best regards, Leonardo.
To: <[email protected]> RE: Meeting. Dear Mr. John, Thank you for this opportunity. I am writting this email to confirm our meeting tomorrow night and the possibility of it being at 8:00 p.m. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Cordially, Diana Cortés Forero.
To: <[email protected]> RE: Question Dear Mr. Jhonathan Thank you for the quick response I am going to correct the mistake of the last inform with the indication of I asked you. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards, Irland Hoyle

To: [email protected]

Subject: RE: Interview

Dear Mr. Rodriguez,

Thank you very much for the opportunity.

I am writing to confirm my attendance tomorrow at 3:00 pm in his office for our interview.

Again, thank you very much.

Cordially,

Alejandra Agudelo

Dear Mr. John, Thank you for this opportunity. It is amazing. I am writing to confirm our meeting tomorrow night. Is it possible at 8 pm? I am available for another day if you cannot. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards, Leonardo Torres.
To: \[[email protected]] Subject: Reply to "Friendly reminder" Dear Mr. López, Thank you for your commitment with us. I am writing you back, to thank you for sharing your story with everyone in our community, It was so inspiring for all Platzinauts, that is why we want to extend your subscription for half a year, without any extra charge. We encorauge you to keep learning, inspiring and sharing your ideas. We hope you really appreciate this special gift! Never stop learning. Freddy Vega
To: <[email protected]>.co Subject: Letter Human Rights Greetings Mr. Calderón Thank you for the time in this case. I am writing this E- mail, because I report my tescher of Ecology with a Judge for your violation of human rights. The appointment whit the Judge is on June 23th, at 7 am in the supreme court. Thanks again for the time, I wait for your answer. Have a nice week, Alejandro Guzman

Subject: presentation of the new partner of ABBYSAL FREQUENCIES
Dear team, I would like to inform you about our new member in abbysal frequencies.
julian maldonado. he will support us with box office sales, advertising and investments for our upcoming parties.
I hope you all give him a warm welcome
Sincerely: david Hernandez

Dear Mr. Smith. Thank you for the quick response. I am writing back to you to confirm the day and time for the interview. I am available on January 22nd, at 2 pm. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards. Judy Jones.
Dear Mr. John. I hope this message finds you well. Firstly, allow me to express my sincere gratitude for this opportunity; it is indeed a privilege. I am writing to confirm our scheduled meeting for tomorrow evening. Would it be possible to convene at 8 PM? Regrettably, I am committed to prior engagements earlier in the evening and will only become available thereafter. I eagerly anticipate our discussion and am keen to explore the potential avenues our collaboration could lead us down. Please let me know if the proposed time aligns with your schedule or if an adjustment is necessary. Looking forward to our conversation. Warm regards. Leonardo
Madam Alisa Thank you for your time The reason I send this email is for inform you about your son, he said than can't talk you because you don't respond him. He's very concerned and ask me if I can help him to find out why you don't respond him. I look forward to hearing from you. Sincerelly, Lorena Angarita.
To: <[email protected]> RE:Interview Dear Mr. John, Thanks for this opportunity. it is amazing. I am writing to confirm our meeting tomorrow night. Is it ok at 8 pm? I am gonna be available only after this time ‘cause I have some other stuff to do. I Talk to you soon. Best regards, John Marston
Dear Mr. Brown. I hope you are well and I take advantage to thank you for the opportunity. I am writing this email to confirm our meeting tomorrow night. I will be able to at 8 p.m, I Appreciate to confirm if this schedule is ok or if you need to schedule at another time. thank you for your time. sincerely Vanessa parada.
**Example of a formal email without mistakes:** Dear Mr. John, Thank you for the quick response. I am sending this email to confirm our meeting tomorrow night. I will be available after 8 pm, so please advise if that hour fits your schedule too. I look forward to hearing from you. Sincerelly, Alfonso Mugno Caballero
subject: interview canceled Good morning, i am writing this email to inform that for medical reasons i cant go to the interview , i would like to reschedule to the friday. thanks and have a nice day. Leon Chiappa

To: team Platzi
Re: Meeting Confirmation
Dear Mr John
Thank you for this opportunity and your time.
I’m writing to confirm our meeting tomorrow night. I’m going to be available at 8 pm.
Cordially,
Leonardo

RE: Meeting Dear Mr. Williams, Thank you for this opportunity. I am writing to confirm our meeting tomorrow night. Is it ok at 8 pm? I am gonna be available only after this time ‘cause I have some other stuff to do. I await your confirmation. Regards, Leonardo Brown

Email correction:

Dear Mr. John,

I am writing to confirm our meeting tomorrow at 8:00 PM.
I look forward to meeting with you and discussing the opportunity further.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Sincerely,

Leonardo Vargas.

To: <[email protected]> RE: Jon Developer, Golang. Dear Mrs. Eugenia I want to inform you that there is a new job of programmer in Golang. I would like to know if you are interested in the job. For to coordinate an interview, for this week. I await your response. Thank you very much. Best regards Mauricio
Hello Mr. Marchal, Thanks for this opportunity. I am writing back to confirm our meeting. I am available tomorrow night at 8:00 pm. Does this time works for you? I look forward to hearing from you soon. Best Regards Leonardo Da Vinci.
Dear Mr. García. I hope so you are well. I am writing back to thank you for your invitation and confirm our meeting tomorrow evening. If you not have any inconvenience, I’m available after at 5pm. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Regards, Hiddekel Manriquez
Subject: Confirmation of Surgery Appointment and Request for Invoices Dear Dr. Juan Rodriguez, I am writing this email to you to confirm the day and time for the surgery, and also to request the invoices for the surgery. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards, Daniel Meza
Hello Mr. David How are you? Thanks so much for your time is very important talk with you I'm writing to give you thanks for the job opportunity I'm very exited for work with you I hope you have a wonderful day, Talk to you as soon as possible Bye, Juan
Dear Mr. Brown, I hope this email finds you well. The reason I send this email is that we need to adjust the amount of supplies we are providing to the hospital, since there have been some reports of waste and supply theft by the hospital staff. This is unacceptable. As the board instructed us we will decrease the quantity of supplies sent to your facility. But first, I need you to draft a report stating the actual quantity of resources the hospital staff really needs. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Regards, Robert Evans *Chief Financial Officer at Mississippi State Hospital*