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Writing a powerful conclusion

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I think the weight of the essays, chronicles or something written which exposes a thesis or a personal opinion is the conclusion.
And most importantly, the conclusion has to be a clear reflection of our thoughts and beliefs. The research and the process of redaction and conjunction of ideas is important but, the way we finish gives us our own style and the verdict of the readers. We can be emphatic with them or disgusting. The conclusion is the best way to connect with the audience.

Common mistakes!

  • Presenting new information.
  • Repeating the thesis statement.
  • Being apologetic.
  • Ending with a quote.
  • Rushing.

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In a world where blue jays and raccoons can be friends with a white immortal gorilla and live the craziest adventures that a human mind can imagine, a bit of intrigue needs to arise in you, if not, give me some of what you and the writer of this series are taking. 鈥淩egular Show鈥 is for many criticisms a cinematographic piece of art, that has marked and influenced the childhood of many people and as one of those, I can agree that this is the most creative animated series that has been ever created.

Regular Show Is a series of Mordecai and Rigby, a blue jay and a raccoon, respectively, who work for a park where the most absurd and fictitious things happen. With a bubble gum dispenser as a boss, an immortal albino gorilla as a coworker, a fat zombie who lives with a ghost in a trailer, and the park owner鈥檚 son as the 鈥渟upervisor鈥 with ahead of the size of a beach ball, nothing can go well. Now that you have an idea of what are we talking about, let鈥檚 focus on the plot and why is impossible to find inconsistencies in the story, even being so absurd. The regular show consists of 8 seasons, with about 20 episodes each, in which every single episode is a news story, where the park gets destroyed, they fly to the space to fight mystic babies, acquire superpowers or beat each other, but okay鈥 you get me, weird things happen in that park. There鈥檚 another interesting fact about this series and that is that each new tale has a similarity, the structure of the events. First, they are having a civilized conversation as we humans tend to do, then some of the fictitious events mentioned before occur, third, the members of the park find a conflict to fight or argue over about, like that time Skips (the albino gorilla) killed Rigby in an arm wrestling game and had to beat the Death in an arm-wrestling match to resurrect the raccoon. And finally, they reconcile with each other, agree to be friends, just to find a new problem to fight about, and repeat that sequence over and over again. Moving on, now, you understand what type of characters and tales we are talking about, nonetheless, there are many negative and criticizable aspects of this cinematographic piece. One of them is the absurdness or hyperboles, a resource that many series apply to their stories to make it seem more attractive and entertaining, overused can be annoying for viewers and it鈥檚 something I find in regular shows. For instance, Money Heist is a Spanish series where several thieves rob the banks with the best security, every time the police are close to catching them, they make it look (in the most absurd way possible) like it was always part of the plan, this each of the 4 times they robbed. This being a crucial factor of 鈥淩egular Show鈥 can be perceived as annoying and exhausting. Additionally, being a series with each episode a different story can make it hard to trap the viewer鈥檚 attention. Think about the show where you were the most invested in, it was probably something like Stranger Things, a series that combines absurd and real-life experiences that develops a plot that catches the attention of everyone, something we can鈥檛 see on Regular Show.

To conclude, if you are the type of person who likes fictitious cinematographic plays, where they don鈥檛 follow a coherent tale, but the creativity of the writers creates absurd art that may not have you super invested but will give you an entertaining time, 鈥淩egular Show鈥 a not regular series with humanized animals who fight mystic animals (kind off), is just for you.

Never miss a chance in your essay and the conclusion isn鈥檛 the exception

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I think the weight of the essays, chronicles or something written which exposes a thesis or a personal opinion is the conclusion.
And most importantly, the conclusion has to be a clear reflection of our thoughts and beliefs. The research and the process of redaction and conjunction of ideas is important but, the way we finish gives us our own style and the verdict of the readers. We can be emphatic with them or disgusting. The conclusion is the best way to connect with the audience.

I think the weight of the essays, chronicles or something written which exposes a thesis or a personal opinion is the conclusion.
And most importantly, the conclusion has to be a clear reflection of our thoughts and beliefs. The research and the process of redaction and conjunction of ideas is important but, the way we finish gives us our own style and the verdict of the readers. We can be emphatic with them or disgusting. The conclusion is the best way to connect with the audience.

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The importance of a strong conclusion is similar to those moments when you are engrossed in the story of a movie, game, or book, thoroughly enjoying everything until the very end fails to satisfy you. It leaves you with a bad taste in your mouth, despite having liked everything else. I believe that the conclusion is just as important, if not more important, than the initial hook.

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In a world where blue jays and raccoons can be friends with a white immortal gorilla and live the craziest adventures that a human mind can imagine, a bit of intrigue needs to arise in you, if not, give me some of what you and the writer of this series are taking. 鈥淩egular Show鈥 is for many criticisms a cinematographic piece of art, that has marked and influenced the childhood of many people and as one of those, I can agree that this is the most creative animated series that has been ever created.

Regular Show Is a series of Mordecai and Rigby, a blue jay and a raccoon, respectively, who work for a park where the most absurd and fictitious things happen. With a bubble gum dispenser as a boss, an immortal albino gorilla as a coworker, a fat zombie who lives with a ghost in a trailer, and the park owner鈥檚 son as the 鈥渟upervisor鈥 with ahead of the size of a beach ball, nothing can go well. Now that you have an idea of what are we talking about, let鈥檚 focus on the plot and why is impossible to find inconsistencies in the story, even being so absurd. The regular show consists of 8 seasons, with about 20 episodes each, in which every single episode is a news story, where the park gets destroyed, they fly to the space to fight mystic babies, acquire superpowers or beat each other, but okay鈥 you get me, weird things happen in that park. There鈥檚 another interesting fact about this series and that is that each new tale has a similarity, the structure of the events. First, they are having a civilized conversation as we humans tend to do, then some of the fictitious events mentioned before occur, third, the members of the park find a conflict to fight or argue over about, like that time Skips (the albino gorilla) killed Rigby in an arm wrestling game and had to beat the Death in an arm-wrestling match to resurrect the raccoon. And finally, they reconcile with each other, agree to be friends, just to find a new problem to fight about, and repeat that sequence over and over again. Moving on, now, you understand what type of characters and tales we are talking about, nonetheless, there are many negative and criticizable aspects of this cinematographic piece. One of them is the absurdness or hyperboles, a resource that many series apply to their stories to make it seem more attractive and entertaining, overused can be annoying for viewers and it鈥檚 something I find in regular shows. For instance, Money Heist is a Spanish series where several thieves rob the banks with the best security, every time the police are close to catching them, they make it look (in the most absurd way possible) like it was always part of the plan, this each of the 4 times they robbed. This being a crucial factor of 鈥淩egular Show鈥 can be perceived as annoying and exhausting. Additionally, being a series with each episode a different story can make it hard to trap the viewer鈥檚 attention. Think about the show where you were the most invested in, it was probably something like Stranger Things, a series that combines absurd and real-life experiences that develops a plot that catches the attention of everyone, something we can鈥檛 see on Regular Show.

To conclude, if you are the type of person who likes fictitious cinematographic plays, where they don鈥檛 follow a coherent tale, but the creativity of the writers creates absurd art that may not have you super invested but will give you an entertaining time, 鈥淩egular Show鈥 a not regular series with humanized animals who fight mystic animals (kind off), is just for you. Yes

Common mistakes!

  • Presenting new information.
  • Repeating the thesis statement.
  • Being apologetic.
  • Ending with a quote.
  • Rushing.

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Presenting new information.
Repeating the thesis statement.
Being apologetic.
Ending with a quote.
Rushing.

Star Wars Rebels: As a sequel to the Star Wars series Clone Wars, Lucasfilm creates a whole history about the first steps of the Rebels who fight against The Empire after the order 66, the series introduces us to The squadron Fenix, who is a cell of the raising Rebellion. "Rebels" is a poem about all of the magic things that we love about the Star Wars universe, badass moments, quite good development of the characters, and a new thing that blows up our minds with the story of the force and Jedi and Sith legacy. And is a good prequel to the events in A new hope, all of these stories match, and make sense in the canon. I have no complaints about, more than the weird nose of Ezra. 馃寱馃寱馃寱馃寱馃寳

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