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Driving requires alertness and skill. As we increase the speed while driving a car, the time of reaction gets reduced. For example, imagine a person moving at a speed of 30 meters per second in his car. If a deer starts crossing the highway 90 meters away from the car, it will take 3 seconds to hit the deer. Therefore, being distracted by just one second would make a huge difference between having an accident or not and hence the importance of being alert at all times.
Skills are also required when driving, especially when driving in cities. Some people have the skill of visualizing with the mind the space around them and making calculations of how far an object is away from them. This type of skill helps them park faster and prevent hitting the car with another object.
In conclusion, being attentive while driving makes us less likely to have an accident and complementing it with our skills makes driving a safer activity.

What is coherence?
Coherence means that a paragraph is easy to read and understand. This can be done by writing supporting sentences in logical order and connect the ideas with transition signals.

There are many ways to show **respect ** to older people.
The **older people ** are people who, due to their age, have diminished their physical capacity. They need our help and our patience to do the daily tasks that anyone needs: crossing the street, sitting down when traveling in public transport, waiting for a short time standing in line, communicating with another person more slowly, etc. The first way to show **respect ** for older people is to help them and be patient with them.
On the other hand, they are people who surely live alone because their closest relatives have died or have health problems. **Then ** another way to respect them , if a conversation is generated with any of them, try to make the talk extensive. It will make them very happy. In addition, the benefit that older people have is their life experience. They can give us good advice generally.
So there are many ways to ** respect ** older people and **older people **can help us with their advice if we respect them.

That鈥檚 why it鈥檚 so important to read quite a lot to have a good sense of order and coherence on a text

Coherence:

  • Your paragraph is easy to read and understand.
  • The supporting sentences are in some kind of logical order.
  • The ideas are connected by the use of appropriate transition signals.
    Exercise:
    With, ankles, knees, it, types of uses.

Computers are useful in many ways. For example, they are such a great tool for students, with a computer a student can write docs, design slides for a presentation and search information for a task. Nowadays, the computers are a powerful tool for working, if you have internet connection it鈥檚 easy to connect with coworkers, chat with them througout different platforms and so on.
Key Noun: Computer
Consistent pronouns
Transition signals
Logical order

**Coherence.** Practice: Read one of your fellow student鈥檚 paragraph from the previous class on unity, and identify these four tips we learned in this class. There are some characteristics that I always look for in a good hotel. **When choosing a hotel**, there are several characteristics I always look for to ensure a pleasant stay**. First**, the main characteristic is the cleaning, above all in the bathrooms, bedrooms, and other areas. **Second**, I always see that the Hotel has a good location, I prefer hotels that are conveniently located near attractions, shopping centers, supermarkets, and public transportation. **Additionally**, good customer service is important, friendly and helpful staff can greatly enhance the experience. Comfortable amenities, such as a cozy bed, high-quality toiletries, and reliable Wi-Fi, are also essential for a relaxing stay. I also appreciate hotels that offer complimentary breakfast, as it adds value and convenience to my stay. **Lastly**, safety features, like secure locks and well-lit hallways, give me peace of mind, I also always ask if the different services are active all night. \- First tip: the words hotel and hotels were repeated four times. \- Second tip: The pronoun 鈥淚鈥 five times were used. \- Third tip: five transition signals were used. \- Fourth tip: four points logically were used.
4 tips to have a coherent paragraph: * Repeating **key nouns** * Using **consistent pronouns** * Using **transition signals** * **Organizing** the points logically
Credits to Jose Diego Alvarez Paredes Computers are useful in many ways. They are key for almost every profession nowadays. The connection between coworkers and friends is one of the main usage computers offer us. At present, most part of the data is stored in computers, it includes both hard drive or solid-state drive and cloud storage. Not to mention the gigantic number of tasks in which computers save us a lot of time such as calculating data in spreadsheets, editing videos and images, making presentations, and so on. I am only mentioning the basic ones but there are literally thousands of uses where computers are fundamental. Now more than ever, with the evolution of the artificial intelligence, it is mandatory to know how to use a computer and take advantage of this amazing tool. **1. Key nouns:** 6 **2. Consistent pronouns:** 2 **3. Transition signals:** 3 **4. Organizing the points logically:** the first reason of computers鈥 usefulness is accurate developed, which is connection between coworkers and friends. However, there is not a clear and well-develop second point because he gave us characteristics on the hardware and software, but it is not completely delved into these aspects with examples and explanations. Overall, it is a good paragraph. Keep the good job!
Credits to Christian Isturiz: * Computers are useful in many ways. For example, they are such a great tool for students, with a computer a student can write docs, design slides for a presentation and search information for a task. Nowadays, also the computers are a powerful tool for working, if you have internet connection it's easy to connect with coworkers, chat with them througout different platforms and so on. * **Repetition of key noun:** 3 times * **Key noun as pronoun:** They * **Connectors:** For example, nowadays. * **Logically organizing the ideas:** Examples of the main topic(The computers are useful), also I think the "Nowadays" part is kind of redundant; I suggest to change that for "Another example" or "For instance". * Great job! Don't stop leaning :D!

Computers are useful in many ways. For example, they are such a great tool for students, with a computer a student can write docs, design slides for a presentation and search information for a task. Nowadays, also the computers are a powerful tool for working, if you have internet connection it鈥檚 easy to connect with coworkers, chat with them througout different platforms and so on.

  1. 3 times
  2. 1 time
  3. For example, such a, If you, with a

Key nouns
Computers=2 times
Consistent Pronouns
They=1

KEY NOUNS
Driving: It appears 6 times in the paragraph

CONSISTENT PRONOUNS
There isn鈥檛 in the paragraph

TRANSITION SIGNALS
As, For example, Therefore, In conclusion

Everybody has a cell phone, it鈥檚 almost a physiologic necessity for humans. When we buy a new cell phone, we find more internal memory or new functionalities to improve the previous one. People usually change his cell phone every 2 years, on average. Another motivation to change our cell phone is social status. Companies such as Apple releases a new iPhone every year and their fans buy it without doubt. It鈥檚 a religious for them to get the new version of the same cell phone. In conclusion, the behavior of the humans change since we use cell phones and every day we find new ways to use it.

Making the YouTube videos. Always I am learning to how to make the YouTube videos because i love it. The YouTube videos can give me so much money at the future and so much gratification know that all the people see my videos. The important thing about Them is to focus the theme of what they are going to deal with. Therefore I must know how to choose the subject according to what I like. In my case I choose the videos about the travels surround to the world. Another important issue is knowing how to edit them. I use a very good editing program, it鈥檚 called Filmora. I add very nice music. In the end they turn out very great. In conclusion, by choosing a very good topic and knowing how to edit videos, I can already advance a lot in the world of YouTube.

KEY NOUNS:
YouTube videos: 3 times.
CONSISTENT PRONOUNS:
Them: 2 times
TRANSITION SIGNALS:
Therefore
In my case
In the end
In conclusion

I analyzed my own text. I wanted to check if I had met the four TIPs.

**Gold: 7 times
Consisten pronoun: 5 times.
Transitions signal: 9 **

Companies are not family.
It would be horrible if at some point in your life you will have to fire your mom, just because, she did something that hurt you or that you didn鈥檛 like. A very hard premise to begin with鈥ut this is how companies or any kind of business should not work.
Let me tell you about my experience. I work in a company where everyone loved me at the beginning, and everyone treat to each other like 鈥渇amily鈥 I mean really close. When I started to make some mistakes at my job 鈥t was natural that I expected some kind of reprimand, but instead, nothing happened. That lack of guilty about doing something wrong鈥 scaled to more mistakes in the company, not just mine but my coworkers too鈥nd it kept happening鈥ntil something really bad happened.
Not to mention all the negativity and hate that rise among coworkers, whom previous were 鈥渇riends鈥.
Do not work in a company where they treat you like a family that would be my advice.

Computers are useful in many ways. For example researching, which help us finding helpful information when is needed. Another example is entertainment, there are many fun contents on the internet, which certainly make us have a great time. Computers also have taken industries and businesses to a whole new level. Science is another area that computers cover, which along with research, science develops too easily. I haven鈥檛 mentioned about learning purposes, which are easier and quicker than 40 years back. In conclusion, computers have been a essential resource in our lives.

Key Noun: computers
Consist pronoun : 0
transition signal : Another , also and In conclusion

Companies are not family.
It would be horrible if at some point in your life you will have to fire your mom, just because, she did something that hurt you or that you didn鈥檛 like. A very hard premise to begin with鈥ut this is how companies or any kind of business should not work.
Let me tell you about my experience. I work in a company where everyone loved me at the beginning, and everyone treat to each other like 鈥渇amily鈥 I mean really close. When I started to make some mistakes at my job 鈥t was natural that I expected some kind of reprimand, but instead, nothing happened. That lack of guilty about doing something wrong鈥 scaled to more mistakes in the company, not just mine but my coworkers too鈥nd it kept happening鈥ntil something really bad happened.
Not to mention all the negativity and hate that rise among coworkers, whom previous were 鈥渇riends鈥.
Do not work in a company where they treat you like a family that would be my advice.

Computers are useful in many ways. Firstly, computers is a connector with a lot of information freely. Additionally, with the computers you can work and study remotely, and save time. Finally, if you have a laptop you will study in any place that you stay, just you will need an internet connection and power for your laptop.
KEY NOUNS:

  • Computers: 3
    CONSISTENT PRONOUNS:
  • It/ its: 0
    TRANSITION SIGNALS:
  • Firstly, Additionally, Finally.

There are many ways to show respect to older people. First of all, you can show respect to elderly by respecting their beliefs and treating them nicely while arguing. Sharing a well-argumented discussion with an old man or woman and taking into account their opinions and arguments may show that you care about their says. For example, my grandmother loves traveling to Boyaca to visit and spend time with my niece because she is very curious about her stories and pay attention to all of her advices. Secondly, actions demonstrate your willingness to respect ancients. When a person allows to a third-age to pass ahead in the line of the supermarket or a bank, or let them seat in a crowded bus, or offer their help to cross the street in a busy road show that they are worthy. In conclusion, actions and treatments summarize some of the many ways to respect ancients.

  • Forst of all
  • such as
  • Therefore
  • For example
  • For many years
  • Another
  • In conclusion

5 times

  • 7 times