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How to be more confident in your writing

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I share my example for this activity. Could you give me a feedback?

___This is a wonderful opportunity for me to get interviewed at such a renowned company.

Indeed it shall be a privilege for any aspiring professional to have a fruitful career with a reputed firm like yours.

I believe the skillset and experience I posses not only shall bring value to your organization, but in turn shall also help me to acquire experience and sharpen mys skills amidst your organization麓s professional work culture.

If given an opportunity I positively look forward to give my best to your organization.

Make a point and make the case.

Everyone values their time. Effective communication is short, sweet and to the point with a touch of personality.
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Confident writing strategy

  1. Make the point
    1. What one key idea do you want them to remember?
    2. Keep it to one sentence.
    3. Don鈥檛 overthink it.
  2. Make the case
    1. Explain the benefits.
    2. Give reasons and evidence to support your point.
    3. Use a mix of logic and emotion.
  3. Add a friendly thought
    1. Show appreciation.
    2. Be thankful
    3. Show some interest

Point: Soy la persona indicada para unirse al equipo de desarrollo.

case: Platzi busca desarrollador Jr.

Estoy muy feliz de haber sido tomado en cuenta para trabajar con ustedes. Hace 5 a帽os que apoyo mi aprendizaje en su plataforma y me encantar铆a formar parte del equipo que mantiene y mejorar cada d铆a esta aplicaci贸n. En estos 5 a帽os me he enfocado a aprender desarrollo web, puedo programar aplicaciones en el Backend y en el Frontend. Entre las tecnolog铆as que manejo puedo destacar React, Django, y SQL, que s茅 que son algunas de las que utilizan actualmente. Y por su puesto conozco su cultura. Es la principal raz贸n por la que me encantar铆a trabajar con ustedes, para dar lo mejor de m铆 y nunca parar de aprender.

Dear Mr. X.
Hoping you are having a wonderful day I introduce myself. My name is Jesus Guillermo Belman Leal. I have a PhD in public policy and law and more than ten years of experience as a university academic.
I am aware that there are many applicants seeking the same opportunity. However, I consider myself the ideal person for the position because, in addition to my teaching experience, I also have practical experience gained through my participation in numerous legal cases similar to those that serve as examples for the subjects that will be covered in the curriculum of your educational institution.
I am in the best disposition to apply any test that you consider convenient.
Without further ado, I bid you farewell and wish you a pleasant day.

Dear employer,
I am interested in the position of xxxxx that offers your Company. I am electrical engineer with 15 years of experience, I have worked in distinct roles related with the profile you are looking. I have worked like project engineer in EPC contracts that involves design, construction, installation, wiring, test, commissioning and start up of equipment for electrical substations until 500kV. I have experience like designer, field service engineer, projects manager and technical inspector.
I am a team player, understand customer needs and focused to company goals.
I have the opportunity to manage small work groups in the past, and I can lead people to achieve the objectives.
In my free time I play sports, and I draw and paint with my sons.
I hope to have the great privilege to be part of your organization, we can have an interview and talk more about this issues.
I look forward to you communication.
Sincerely,
LM

Good afternoon, here is my dranft of the cover letter:
I am your best option for the position required in this company.
My experience as a representative and leader from the customer service banch provided me with the knowledge that is necessary to comply with the expectations needed in the department and improve the efficiency that is needed to keep our customer happy because they will know that our team will be one the best desition they could have taken in their lives. Through the years I have been working in this area, the chances I had to work with people from all the age ranges and different cultures is one of the reasons that let me tell with confidence, that no matter the challenges we could face in the future of a great company like yours, we will be able to reach the top of the top in the nation.
Knowing that you will be taking the best desition for this company I am looking forward to hear from you in the near future, that I know, will be brilliant.

Clase 7 鈥 C贸mo tener m谩s confianza en tu escritura




Frase

  • Puedo liberarme de todo mientras escribo; mis penas desaparecen, mi valor renace.




驴Qu茅 debemos hacer cuando queremos escribir?

  • Debemos asegurarnos de que sea corto y conciso.

驴Por qu茅 cuando escribimos debemos asegurarnos que sea de manera corta y concisa?

  • Porque debemos valorar el tiempo de la otra persona.

驴Qu茅 estrategia debemos de implementar para escribir con m谩s confianza?

  • Escribir de manera corta y concisa
  • A帽adir algo amistoso.

驴Qu茅 podemos hacer para que nuestra escritura sea corta?

  • Pensar en la idea principal que queremos transmitir.
  • Mantener nuestra idea principal en una sola frase.
  • Escribir de manera natural.

驴Qu茅 podemos hacer para que nuestra escritura sea concisa?

  • Explicar los beneficios de nuestro punto de vista.
  • Agregar pruebas y evidencias que apoyen nuestro punto de vista.
  • Usar un mix de l贸gica y emociones para exponer nuestro punto de vista.

驴Qu茅 podemos hacer para que nuestra escritura tenga personalidad y un toque amistoso?

  • Apreciar nuestra escritura.
  • Ser agradecidos.
  • Mostrar inter茅s.
  • If you practice, you鈥檒l be able to born your courage and increase your courage and confidence.
  • Everyone values their time. Effective communication is short, sweet and to the point with a touch of personality.
  • Try to keep that point succinct
  • Gather evidence.
  • Add a personal note for the other person.

thank you

Learn to love anything you want to be good for.

I have always been a huge fan of ideas and how they connect with the people. It has always been difficult to translate every idea in a craft, however, they aren鈥檛 impossible to try. Since my journey as a student, I鈥檝e always been a doerof trial and error. It seems useless to try everything in this short life, but in my point of view, enjoy and try to recreate the new ideas that the world offers is remaarkable for me.
The field of action which offers me diversication, adventure and profit is the markets, or better, investing
I have got a lot to try and a lot to learn to live the life my soul wants

I am not ready to work as a machine learning engineer but I am a mechatronics technician so I鈥檒l write the letter to apply for a job like this.
Hi! I鈥檓 Brandon Hernandez.
I saw that you are looking for an electronic technician, the mechatronic it implies a lot of careers like electronic, mechanic, programing microcontrollers an others, but is more focused in electronic because we specialize in task automation so I think that i鈥檓 the best opcion because besides of develop my role I can help you in other tasks.
I would really like to work in your company, because the culture is very good and the people is good too.
well, i appreciate you鈥檙e taking the time to read my letter and have a nice day.

point for evaluation

Confident Writing Strategy

  1. Make the point.
  2. Make you case.
  3. Add a friendly thougth.

Me gusta la forma de abordar la escritura de este profe.

> Activity 6 <u>Let SpongeBob do the job</u> Hello, Ana, I hope this letter finds you well. Let me tell you why I'm a good choice for the Data Specialist position. When you want to implement your vision as a director, first you want to get rid of other directors' requests. You want to be less operational and more strategic. In order to do that, you want maximum effectiveness in your processes and make the data available to the managers who need it. I'm the person who can make that real. I worked with several companies and industries doing so, and got into those projects because I certificate 2nd-level Tableau within the first 3 months of knowing the tool and no prior background. Any.聽 This is my superpower: I can learn pretty fast. I can learn how your company operates, absorb this knowledge like a sponge, identify weak points in the information flows and solve the problems. I did this in the past.So if you combine this SuperLearning and some hard data-skills like SQL & Tableau, that's all you need for the position.聽 Let me know if you're interested. Have a nice week,聽 Aaron (:
> How to be more confident in your writing Method: Make a point and make the case Effective comunication is short, sweet and to the point, with a touch of personality > Make the point 1. What one key idea do you want to be remembered? 2. Keep it to one sentence 3. Don't overthink it > Make the case 1. Explain the benefits 2. Give reasons and evidence to support the idea 3. Use mix of logic and emotion > Add a friendly thought 1. Show appreciation 2. Be thankful 3. Show some interest > Activity 6 Draft a cover letter to a potential hiring manager to tell them why you are the best person for the job at their company
I think I'm very good in this aspect. I actually have a blog in which when I have something that I want to communicate, I express it there. I invite you to read it (it's in spanish): <https://mi-dia-en-unos-minutos.super.site/>

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Se帽ores, ( )

Soy Claudia Rangel, especialista desde hace 4 a帽os en escritos, redacci贸n y publicaci贸n de ensayos; con experiencia en redacci贸n de art铆culos para revistas y peri贸dicos en la secci贸n cultural; pongo a su servicio mi perfil y espero poder trabajar con ustedes e intercambiar conocimientos, para contribuir con los ideales de su empresa y continuar as铆 con el mejoramiento y crecimiento que merecen, buscando seguir siendo l铆deres en el sector.

Mi nombre es Juan David y soy el indicado para ser parte de esta empresa. No soy indispensable, pero soy el mejor haciendo mi trabajo y puedo aportar gran valor con mis conocimientos en dise帽o de interfaces, aplicando reglas y leyes del UX para crear productos impecables. A dem谩s me encanta ayudar y colaborar con las distintas 谩reas en el equipo, aplicando habilidades blandas para mejorar de manera individual, en equipo y as铆 crecer como empresa. Soy el indicado porque nunca paro de aprender y tengo un gran compromiso con mi trabajo.

Recently, I discover myself I like to write so much. I write since many years ago but, I got the opportunity to write professional things for Platzi and makes me feel very satisfied to give a little I know about my professionals skills.
Writing will be every time more important in my life, I think.

Here is my sharing for this lesson:

鈥淲hile taking the course I was called by a company I am applying for so I got surprise jaja鈥

Here is my letter:

Hi Juan

I am writing this letter due to I see you are looking for a leader position in your company and I am interested for it.

I consider myself that I can achieve this role pretty well since I have been working in this industry for about 4 years. In addition I am a very confident person who can get along in different situations and be able to achieve the goals that the company have.

thanks for taking the time to read it.

I really appreciate it

Hello 馃憢
Here鈥檚 my activity:
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It鈥檚 a pleasure to greet you, Mr. Manager.
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I would like to talk to you about the Junior Digital Marketer position as I am confident that I meet all the requirements for the role. I am well-versed in terms and methodologies of SEO, Community Manager, Social Media Manager, E-mail Marketing, PPC, and SEM.
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I would love to be part of your great team, and rest assured that with my assistance, you will be able to achieve all your marketing objectives. Shall we start discussing our goals tomorrow to avoid further delays?

Mi nombre es Carlos M, soy abogado especialista.

Acudo a usted para ofrecer mis servicios como asesor jur铆dico en las 谩reas de Seguridad Social y Salud en en el Trabajo, y Talento Humano. Soy la persona id贸nea para el cumplimiento de tan honorable labor teniendo en cuenta que mi perfil y experiencia laboral demuestra mi trayectoria y capacidades para resolver problemas y sacar adelante proyectos relacionados con la materia.

Ser谩 un honor ser parte de su empresa para contribuir con su correcto funcionamiento y aportar mis conocimientos coadyuvando su crecimiento.

Ser茅 tambi茅n parte de su equipo para fortalecer mis conocimientos y crecer profesionalmente para retribuir y contribuir a la empresa y a la comunidad en general.

Finalmente, en el evento de ser seleccionado en agradecimiento brindar茅 mi mayor esfuerzo para cumplir con un trabajo de calidad.

Yaeji once said 鈥渓et it flow鈥 so鈥 easy does it 銉

Make the point and the case... don't forget add a friendly thought 鈽

Well, it seems like the final cheat code to release our writing skills鈥

To whom it may concer:

Connection brings us closer. And I believe that the skills I鈥檝e developed in my different projects are perfect to bring you closer to your audience. I鈥檇 love to sum up to your mission as I deeply believe not only what you do, but also why you do it. At last, I鈥檇 like to thank you for this opportunity and to tell you I鈥檝e been following all of your efforts for the last 3 years, and have nothing but admiration for your goals and achievements.

Best regards, Gustavo Rodriguez.

my example: Hello Mr manager, i am interested in the position as a manager, i am very surprise on how fast the company has grown and for me be part of it would be a goal. I am very creative, kindess and result oriented and passionated to guide people, i Will be open on this monday for a meeting. have a good day.

Muy buenas tardes, Sr.X

Me pongo en contacto con usted por el motivo de que me encuentro totalmente interesado en formar parte de su equipo de trabajo. El puesto de mi inter茅s es 篓Manager zona Xalapa篓 para el cual me siento seguro de poder desempe帽ar, a la vez le comparto que me emociona el poder colaborar en una empresa enfocada en el 谩mbito Pensionario, apoyando al derechohabiente.

Todos merecemos una oportunidad y espero tener una platica amena con usted para platicarle de c贸mo podr铆amos colaborar y mejorar.

Que tenga un excelente d铆a Sr. X
隆脡xito!

Case : Web Developer Position
Dear employer:
I have a 2 years experience as a web developer and I am currently managing two e-commerce business that I build my self. Because of this two e-commerce I have acquired a vast skill set in different areas like design, digital marketing, UI, etc. I think because of this skill sets I can contribute a lot more than your regular web developer.
I look forward to you communication.
Sincerely,
Raul Parra

cuando se trata de escribir haz que sea corto y conciso

This is my activity for lesson 6.

Good Afternoon Mrs Pringles.

I鈥檓 sending you this email because i saw the vacancy for industrial designer on your company.

Attached on this email i added my personal information and some of the most popular projects that i realize, also i would like to introduce myself a bit.

I have been working as industrial designer since 2009, i have developed a lot of new prototypes and solve a lot of problems for my customers.

Adding to that i also been on charge of a small group of people, and also helping the company i was working whit the new 3D print department.

Thank you for taking your time reading my email, and I鈥檒l stay pendant of a response.

Have a great day.

Good morning, nice to meet you Ricardo Gomez

I鈥檓 a systems engineer with specialization in project management, data analytics and big data.

I love the position that your company is offering and I want to be part of your team and culture, additionally the contributions that I want to share with your company, are based on my experience and constant study,

I have worked and advised large companies where the challenges that were set were achieved and the benefits have been seen over time.

I love what I do and I share my knowledge with the objective that my work team remains active, motivated, updated to keep moving forward, through active leadership and based on people.

I want to be part of your team and achieve your goals together.

Thank you very much for your attention, waiting for your feedback.

Ejemplo para trabajar en un ecommerce enfocado al mercado de mascotas: Desde hace un par de a帽os, he seguido su trabajo en la creaci贸n de una tienda hecha por petlovers para petlovers. Me encanta la idea de un lugar donde genuinamente busquen el bienestar de nuestras mascotas o m谩s que eso de nuestra familia. Durante los 煤ltimos a帽os me he especializado en la creaci贸n y optimizaci贸n de campa帽as publicitarias que realmente lleguen a las personas amantes de los animales, cuya cosa favorita es la de cuidar y amar a est谩s criaturitas. Por tal motivo, les pido amablemente que me permitan conocer m谩s de ustedes para as铆 poder trabajar con ustedes.