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My goals and dreams in my life
For me It’s a Little complicated to describe all my dreams and goals that I have in my life because we ocassionally think about that due to our problems ans situations that we have, first of all you need to care about your good habits as eating health, doing exercise and maintaining a healthy body, you need to solve all the problems that you have in your life but if they’re not posible to resolve they shouldn’t be an obstacle and you need to have discipline. It’s my opinión so i did a list of all my dreams and goals that i haven’t done yet it’s a Little complicated but it’s not imposible.
1. My first goal is to finish my English course and i must be able to speak English so clearly having C1 level and maybe having a TOEFL certificate.
2. My second goal is to finish my course online that i am taking and do an interesting project.
3. My third goal is to have a very good networking because i haven’t updated my profile on LinkedIn for increasing my possibilities to get a better job and i need to be more sociable knowing people with the same interest.
4. My fourth goal is to increase my salary, I earn enough money but i think that it’s not sufficient because i need to pay my debts i don’t have many debts but i need to pay them my recommendation, you shouldn’t get into debt if it’s not necessary.
5. My fifth goal is to know about investment. How to invest my money to generate profit i usually save money in the bank but i would like to know more about investment tools.
6. I have never traveled to another country and i would like to know France, because i think that france is a wonderful country to visit and i would like to know the Eiffel Tower, the versailles castle and Notre Dame Cathedral.
7. I would like to travel in a cruise leaving from pacific ocean in mexico to some caribbiean island as cuba, puerto rico, Bahamas and many others islands.
8. I would like to travel in New Zealand because i think that it’s a wonderful country to know where there are spectacular lanscapes as waterfalls, mountains, volcanoes, glaciers, deserts ans many spectaculars beaches.
All things that i menctioned you i haven’t done yet and i’m going to work for these goals and dreams can be done all in this life is possible you only need to decide for getting reality and i would like to know about your point of view about this theme, why do you consider that your goals and dreams that you have in your mind are so important.
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Thanks for sharing your text! You've expressed a lot of thoughtful ideas and ambitions, which is great. Now let's go through the spelling and grammar corrections step by step, along with explanations for each one. After that, I'll provide a revised version of your text.
🔍 Mistakes and Explanations
Paragraph 1:
"For me It’s a Little complicated..."
- Mistake: “It’s” → lowercase “i” / “Little” should not be capitalized.
- ✅ Correction: “For me, it’s a little complicated...”
- Why: “It’s” is not at the beginning of the sentence, and “little” isn’t a proper noun.
"...that I have in my life because we ocassionally think about that due to our problems ans situations..."
- Mistake: “ocassionally” → occasionally; “ans” → and
- ✅ Correction: "...because we occasionally think about that due to our problems and situations..."
"...you need to care about your good habits as eating health..."
- Mistake: “eating health” → eating healthy
- ✅ Correction: "...your good habits such as eating healthy..."
- Why: “Healthy” is an adjective describing the way you eat.
"...if they’re not posible to resolve..."
- Mistake: “posible” → possible
- ✅ Correction: "...if they’re not possible to resolve..."
"It’s my opinión..."
- Mistake: “opinión” → opinion
- ✅ Correction: “It’s my opinion...”
- Why: Likely a typing error or Spanish influence.
Numbered Goals:
"...and i must be able..."
- ✅ Correction: “I must be able...” (capitalize “I”)
"...that i am taking..."
- ✅ Correction: “that I am taking”
"...because i haven’t updated..."
- ✅ Correction: “because I haven’t updated...”
"...to get a better job and i need to be more sociable knowing people with the same interest."
- ✅ Correction: "...I need to be more sociable, meeting people with the same interests."
- Why: “Interest” should be plural. Also, “knowing people” → “meeting people” is more natural here.
"...but i think that it’s not sufficient..."
- ✅ Correction: “but I think that it’s not sufficient...”
"...because i need to pay my debts i don’t have many..."
- ✅ Correction: "...because I need to pay my debts. I don’t have many..."
- Why: Needs a full stop to separate two ideas.
"...my recommendation, you shouldn’t get into debt..."
- ✅ Correction: "My recommendation is: you shouldn’t get into debt..."
- Why: Sentence is incomplete without a verb (“is”).
"...investment. How to invest my money..."
- ✅ Correction: "...investment – how to invest my money..."
- Why: “How to invest...” should follow smoothly, not be a sentence fragment.
"...France, because i think that france is a wonderful country..."
- ✅ Correction: "...France, because I think that France is a wonderful country..."
- Why: Capitalize country names and “I”.
"...versailles castle and Notre Dame Cathedral."
- ✅ Correction: "...Versailles Castle and Notre Dame Cathedral."
"...leaving from pacific ocean in mexico to some caribbiean island as cuba, puerto rico, Bahamas..."
- ✅ Correction: "...leaving from the Pacific Ocean in Mexico to some Caribbean islands such as Cuba, Puerto Rico, the Bahamas..."
- Why: Proper nouns need capitalization; spelling errors fixed.
"...spectacular lanscapes as waterfalls...deserts ans many spectaculars beaches."
- ✅ Correction: "...spectacular landscapes such as waterfalls...deserts, and many spectacular beaches."
- Why: Spelling and grammar (“spectaculars beaches” → “spectacular beaches” – "spectacular" is an adjective, not plural).
Final Sentence:
"All things that i menctioned you I haven’t done yet and i’m going to work for these goals and dreams can be done..."
- ✅ Correction: “All the things I mentioned, I haven’t done yet, but I’m going to work toward achieving these goals and dreams. They can be achieved...”
- Why: “menctioned” → “mentioned”; sentence restructured for clarity.
✅ Corrected Version
Here is the revised version of your text with proper grammar and spelling:
My Goals and Dreams in My Life
For me, it’s a little complicated to describe all the dreams and goals I have in life because we occasionally forget to think about them due to the problems and situations we face. First of all, you need to take care of your good habits, such as eating healthy, doing exercise, and maintaining a healthy body. You should try to solve the problems in your life, but if they’re not possible to resolve, they shouldn’t be an obstacle. You need to have discipline. That’s my opinion, so I made a list of all my dreams and goals that I haven’t achieved yet. It’s a little complicated, but it’s not impossible.
- My first goal is to finish my English course, and I must be able to speak English clearly at a C1 level and maybe obtain a TOEFL certificate.
- My second goal is to finish the online course I am taking and complete an interesting project.
- My third goal is to build a strong professional network. I haven’t updated my LinkedIn profile, which could help increase my chances of getting a better job. I also need to be more sociable and meet people with similar interests.
- My fourth goal is to increase my salary. I earn enough money, but I think it’s not sufficient because I need to pay off my debts. I don’t have many debts, but I still need to pay them. My recommendation is: you shouldn’t get into debt unless it’s necessary.
- My fifth goal is to learn about investing—how to invest my money to generate profits. I usually save money in the bank, but I would like to explore different investment tools.
- I have never traveled to another country, and I would like to visit France because I think it’s a wonderful country. I’d like to see the Eiffel Tower, Versailles Castle, and Notre Dame Cathedral.
- I would like to go on a cruise, departing from the Pacific Ocean in Mexico to visit some Caribbean islands such as Cuba, Puerto Rico, the Bahamas, and many other islands.
- I would also like to travel to New Zealand because I think it’s a spectacular country with beautiful landscapes like waterfalls, mountains, volcanoes, glaciers, deserts, and many stunning beaches.
All the things I mentioned I haven’t done yet, but I’m going to work toward achieving these goals and dreams. Everything in life is possible—you just need to decide to make it a reality. I would also like to know your point of view about this topic: why do you consider your goals and dreams important?
