Repetición de Sustantivos Clave para Mejorar la Comprensión

Clase 7 de 19 • Curso Intermedio de Escritura en Inglés

Resumen

Dolphins are interesting because they display almost human behavior at times. For example, they display the human emotions of joy and sadness. During training, when they do something correctly, they squeal excitedly and race toward their trainer.
When they make a mistake, however, they droop noticeably and mope around their pool. Furthermore, they help each other when they are in trouble. If one is sick, it sends out a message, and others in the area swim to help it. They push it to the surface of the water so that it can breathe. They stay with it for days or weeks until it recovers or dies. They have also helped trapped or lost whales navigate their way safely out to the open sea. They are so intelligent and helpful, in fact, that the U.S. Navy is training them to become underwater bomb disposal experts.

Santiago Tellez Hernandez

student•

Dolphins are interesting because they display almost human behavior at times. For example, a dolphin display the human emotions of joy and sadness. During training, when they do something correctly, they squeal excitedly and race toward their trainer. When dolphins make a mistake, however, they droop noticeably and mope around their pool. Furthermore, they help each other when they are in trouble. If a dolphin is sick, it sends out a message, and others in the area swim to help it. They push it to the surface of the water so that it can breathe. Dolphins stay with it for days or weeks until it recovers or dies. Dolphins have also helped trapped or lost whales navigate their way safely out to the open sea. They are so intelligent and helpful, in fact, that the U.S. Navy is training those mammals to become underwater bomb disposal experts.

Axel Yaguana

Team Platzi•

Thank you! :D

Felipe Bernardo González Barranco

student•

:clap: :clap: :clap:

Gabriel Obregón

student•

KEY NOUNS REPETITION A noun is a word that represents a living creature, an object, or a concept. So any noun can be represented in different ways. For example you can write English or this Language or it to represent the noun English. A text is easier to understand when it repeats words as English or this Language instead of only ‘it’, for example. It is called: Key Nouns Repetition.

Dolphins text exercise: replace those words that have to do with dolphins for dolphins, a dolphin or a mammal. The paragraph will be easier to understand.

Carlos Andres Osorio Diaz

student•

Hola @Andres! Me podrías explicar por que razón está mal mi respuesta?

Andrés Moncada

teacher•

Hey Carlos! Well, you are partly right, although you could identify the Key Nound by the theme, the theme could have lots of topics, The best answer would be the topic of the paragraph, what the text is basically about.

Carlos Andres Osorio Diaz

student•

Awesome!! Thank you very much!

Santiago Velasco Mosquera

student•

Dolphins are interesting because they display almost human behavior at times. For example, A dolphin display the human emotions of joy and sadness. During training, when a dolphin do something correctly, Dolphins squeal excitedly and race toward their trainer. When a dolphin make a mistake, however, they droop noticeably and mope around their pool. Furthermore, Mammal help each other when they are in trouble. If one is sick, a dolphin sends out a message, and others in the area swim to help it. Dolphins push it to the surface of the water so that it can breathe. Dolphin stay with it for days or weeks until it recovers or dies. Dolphins have also helped trapped or lost whales navigate their way safely out to the open sea. Dolphins are so intelligent and helpful, in fact, that the U.S. Navy is training them to become underwater bomb disposal experts.

Carlos Eduardo Talledo Núñez

company_admin•

Dolphins are interesting because they display almost human behavior at times. For example, dolphins display the human emotions of joy and sadness. During training, when dolphins do something correctly, they squeal excitedly and race toward their trainer. When dolphins make a mistake, however, they droop noticeably and mope around their pool. Furthermore, dolphins help each other when they are in trouble. If one is sick, it sends out a message, and others in the area swim to help it. Dolphins push it to the surface of the water so that it can breathe. Dolphins stay with it for days or weeks until it recovers or dies. Dolphins have also helped trapped or lost whales navigate their way safely out to the open sea. Dolphins are so intelligent and helpful, in fact, that the U.S. Navy is training them to become underwater bomb disposal experts.

Platzi Team

student•

Dolphins are interesting because they display almost human behavior at times. For example, dolphins display the human emotions of joy and sadness. During training, when a dolphin does something correctly, it squeals excitedly and races toward their trainer. When they make a mistake, however, they droop noticeably and mope around their pool. Furthermore, they help each other when they are in trouble. If a dolphin is sick, it sends out a message, and others in the area swim to help it. They push it to the surface of the water so that it can breathe. They stay with it for days or weeks until it recovers or dies. They have also helped trapped or lost whales navigate their way safely out to the open sea. They are so intelligent and helpful, in fact, that the U.S. Navy is training them to become underwater bomb disposal experts.

Angela Mateus

student•

Sorry, but I don't see the paragraph in the resource section as the teacher said.

It is in another place?

Axel Yaguana

Team Platzi•

Hi, Angela! :D

Thank you for letting us know. The paragraph was just added to the description of the class.

Andrea Catalina Nieto Alvarado

student•

Dolphins are interesting because they display almost human behavior at times. For example, A dolphin display the human emotions of joy and sadness. During training, when dolphins do something correctly, dolphins squeal excitedly and race toward their trainer.

When a dolphin make a mistake, however, dolphins droop noticeably and mope around their pool. Furthermore, dolphins help each other when they are in trouble. If a dolphin is sick, it sends out a message, and others in the area swim to help it. Dolphins push it to the surface of the water so that it can breathe. Dolphins stay with it for days or weeks until it recovers or dies. Dolphins have also helped trapped or lost whales navigate their way safely out to the open sea. Dolphins are so intelligent and helpful, in fact, that the U.S. Navy is training them to become underwater bomb disposal experts.

Josué Destefano Dagostino

student•

When dolphins make a mistake, however, they droop noticeably and mope around their pool. Furthermore, dolphins help each other when they are in trouble. If one is sick , it sends out a message , and others in the area swim to help it, they push it to the surface of the water so that it can breathe . Dolphins stay with it for days or weeks until it recovers or dies. They have also helped trapped or lost whales navigate their way safely out to the open sea. Dolphins are so intelligent and helpful, in fact, that the U.S. Navy is training them to become underwater bomb disposal experts.

Fernando Javier Ramos García

student•

Dolphins are interesting because they display almost human behavior at times. For example, dolphins display the human emotions of joy and sadness. During training, when they do something correctly, dolphins squeal excitedly and race toward their trainer. When dolphins make a mistake, they drop noticeably and mope around their pool. Furthermore, dolphins help each other when they are in trouble. If a dolphin is sick, it sends out a message, and others in the area swim to help him. They push it to the surface of the water so that it can breathe. They stay with it for days or weeks until it recovers or dies. Dolphins have also helped trapped or lost whales navigate their way safely out to the open sea. The mammals are so intelligent and helpful, in fact, that the U.S. Navy is training them to become underwater bomb disposal experts.

Alejandro Zuñiga Saavedra

student•

Key Nouns Repetition.

Replace those words that have to do with dolphins, a dolphin, or mammal (s).

When dolphins make a mistake, however, they droop noticeably and mope around their pool. Furthermore, a dolphin helps each other when they are in trouble. If one is sick, a dolphin send out a message, and others in the area swim to help it. Dolphins push it to the surface of the water so that a it can breathe. Dolphins stay with it for days or weeks until it recovers or dies. Dolphins have also helped trapped or lost whales navigate their way safely out to the open sea. Dolphins are so intelligent and helpful, in fact, that the U.S. Navy is training them to become underwater bomb disposal experts.

Pablo Lezama

student•

When mammals make a mistake, however, dolphins droop noticeably and mope around their pool. Furthermore, a dolphin help each other when they are in trouble. If a dolphine is sick, it sends out a message, and others in the area swim to help it. Dolphins push it to the surface of the water so that it can breathe. Mammals stay with it for days or weeks until it recovers or dies. Dolphins have also helped trapped or lost whales navigate their way safely out to the open sea. Dolphins are so intelligent and helpful, in fact, that the U.S. Navy is training hem to become underwater bomb disposal experts.

Jose Barboza

student•

Dolphins are interesting because they display almost

human behavior at times. For example, a dolphin display the human

emotions of joy and sadness. During training, a dolphin do

something correctly, they squeal excitedly and race toward

their trainer.

When Dolphins make a mistake, however, they droop noticeably and

mope around their pool. Furthermore, they help each other

when Dolphins are in trouble. lf a dolphin is sick, it sends out a

message, and others in the area swim to help it. They push

it to the surface of the water so that it can breathe. They

stay with it for days or weeks until it recovers or dies.

Dolphins have also helped trapped or lost whales navigate their

way safely out to the open sea. They are so intelligent and

helpful, in fact, that the U.S. Navy is training them to

become underwater bomb disposal experts.

Jennyffer Paola Monroy Alarcon

student•

Dolphins are interesting because they display almost human behavior at times. For example, these mammals display the human emotions of joy and sadness. During training, when the dolphin does something correctly, it squeals excitedly and races toward their trainer. But when the dolphin makes a mistake, however, it droops noticeably and mopes around their pool. Furthermore, dolphins help each other when they are in trouble. If a dolphin is sick, the other mammal sends out a message, and other dolphins in the area swim to help it. They push the dolphin to the surface of the water so that it can breathe. They stay with the mammal for days or weeks until it recovers or dies. Dolphins have also helped trapped or lost whales navigate their way safely out to the open sea. These mammals are so intelligent and helpful, in fact, that the U.S. Navy is training them to become underwater bomb disposal experts.

Sofia Ortiz Trujillo

student•

Dolphins are interesting because this mammal's display almost human behavior at times. For example, dolphins display the human emotions of joy and sadness. During training, when a dolphin do something correctly, dolphins squeal excitedly and race toward their trainer. When a dolphin make a mistake, however, they droop noticeably and mope around their pool. Furthermore, they help each other when they are in trouble. If one is sick, it sends out a message, and others in the area swim to help it. Dolpins push it to the surface of the water so that it can breathe. Dolphins stay with it for days or weeks until it recovers or dies. This mammals have also helped trapped or lost whales navigate their way safely out to the open sea. They are so intelligent and helpful, in fact, that the U.S. Navy is training them to become underwater bomb disposal experts

William Gonzalez

student•

Dolphins are interesting because they display almost human behavior at times. For example, they display the human emotions of joy and sadness. During training, when a dolphin do something correctly, they squeal excitedly and race toward their trainer. When they make a mistake, however, they droop noticeably and mope around their pool. Furthermore, they help each other when they are in trouble. If one is sick, it sends out a message, and others in the area swim to help it. They push it to the surface of the water so that it can breathe. They stay with it for days or weeks until it recovers or dies. They have also helped trapped or lost whales navigate their way safely out to the open sea. Mammals are so intelligent and helpful, in fact, that the U.S. Navy is training them to become underwater bomb disposal experts.

Viridiana Contreras Martinez

student•

Dolphins Dolphins are interesting because they display almost human behavior at times. For example, dolphins display the human emotions of joy and sadness. During training, when these mammal do something correctly, they squeal excitedly and race toward their trainer. When they make a mistake, however, they droop noticeably and mope around their pool. Furthermore, they help each other when they are in trouble. If a dolphin is sick, it sends out a message, and others in the area swim to help it. They push it to the surface of the water so that it can breathe. Dolphins stay with it for days or weeks until it recovers or dies. These mammals have also helped trapped or lost whales navigate their way safely out to the open sea. Dolphins are so intelligent and helpful, in fact, that the U.S. Navy is training them to become underwater bomb disposal experts.

Mauricio Rodriguez Romero

student•

Dolphins are interesting because they display almost human behavior at time. For example, dolphins display the human emotions of joy and sadness. During training when dolphins do something correctly, they squeal excitedly and race toward their trainer. When they make a mistake, however, dolphins droop noticeably and mope around their pool. Furthermore, dolphins help each other when they are in trouble. If a dolphin is sick, it sends out a message, and other mammals in the area swim to help it. Dolphins push it to the surface of the water so that it can breathe. They stay with the dolphin for days or weeks until the mammal recovers or dies. Dolphins also help trapped or lost whales navigate their way safely out to open sea. Dolphins are so intelligent and helpful, in fact, that the US Navy is training them to become underwater bomb disposal experts.

Alvaro Andrés Espitia Varón

student•

Dolphin is one of the more interesting mammal all over the world, because it displays almost human behavior at times. For example, it display the human emotions of joy an sadness. During training, when they do something correctly, they squeal excitedly and race towards their trainer.

When it makes a mistake, however, they droop noticeably and mope around their pool. Furthermore, it helps each other when they are in trouble. If one is sick, it sends out a message, and others in the area swim to help it. They push it to the surface of the water so that the one can breathe. It stays with it for days or weeks until they recovers or dies. It has also helped trapped or lost whales navigate their safely out to the open sea. It is so intelligent and helpful, in fact, that the US Navy is training it to become underwater bomb disposal experts.

María del Consuelo Irastorza Vázquez

student•

When dolphins make a mistake, however, they droop noticeably and mope around their pool. Furthermore, dolphins help each other when they are in trouble. If one is sick, it sends out a message, and others in the area swim to help it. Dolphins push it to the surface of the water so that it can breathe. Dolphins stay with it for days or weeks until it recovers or dies. Dolphins have also helped trapped or lost whales navigate their way safely out to the open sea. Dolphins are so intelligent and helpful, in fact, that the U.S. Navy is training them to become underwater bomb disposal experts.