Felipe Bernardo González Barranco
That's why it's so important to read quite a lot to have a good sense of order and coherence on a text
¿Cómo lograr la coherencia en tus escritos?
La coherencia es un elemento esencial para garantizar que un texto sea comprensible y fluido. Al igual que cuando compartes tus pensamientos con un amigo, un párrafo debe seguir una estructura lógica que enlace las ideas de manera clara. Entonces, ¿cómo podemos alcanzar ese nivel de coherencia en nuestras escrituras? Aquí te compartimos algunos consejos prácticos y estrategias que facilitan el lograrlo.
¿Qué es la coherencia?
La coherencia significa que tu párrafo es fácil de leer y entender. Para ello, las frases de apoyo deben estar organizadas en un orden lógico y las ideas deben estar conectadas mediante el uso apropiado de partículas de transición. Imagina un texto donde los temas cambian abruptamente; la coherencia evita exactamente eso, manteniendo la narrativa unida y comprensible.
¿Cuáles son los consejos para escribir párrafos coherentes?
Repetición de sustantivos clave
Uso de pronombres coherentes
Uso de partículas de transición
Organización lógica de los puntos
¿Cómo puedo practicar estos consejos?
Para practicar, te animamos a realizar una tarea: intenta identificar estos cuatro consejos en párrafos escritos por otros. Puedes tomar un párrafo de un libro, un artículo o incluso un texto escrito por un compañero y desglosarlo para ver cómo se implementan estas técnicas. Este ejercicio no solo mejorará tu capacidad de identificar una buena coherencia, sino que también afinará tus habilidades de escritura. ¡Nos vemos en los comentarios para discutir tus hallazgos y en la próxima sesión para continuar aprendiendo juntos!
Felipe Bernardo González Barranco
That's why it's so important to read quite a lot to have a good sense of order and coherence on a text
estiven laferre
There are many ways to show **respect ** to older people. The **older people ** are people who, due to their age, have diminished their physical capacity. They need our help and our patience to do the daily tasks that anyone needs: crossing the street, sitting down when traveling in public transport, waiting for a short time standing in line, communicating with another person more slowly, etc. The first way to show **respect ** for older people is to help them and be patient with them. On the other hand, they are people who surely live alone because their closest relatives have died or have health problems. **Then ** another way to respect them , if a conversation is generated with any of them, try to make the talk extensive. It will make them very happy. In addition, the benefit that older people have is their life experience. They can give us good advice generally. So there are many ways to ** respect ** older people and **older people **can help us with their advice if we respect them.
Carlos Andres Osorio Diaz
Santiago Tellez Hernandez
Coherence:
Obdaly Garay
Computers are useful in many ways. ++For example++, they ++are such a great tool for students, with a computer a student can write docs, design slides for a presentation and search information for a task++. ++Nowadays++, the computers ++are a powerful tool for working, if you have internet connection it’s easy to connect with coworkers, chat with them througout different platforms and so on.++ Key Noun: Computer Consistent pronouns ++Transition signals++ ++Logical order++
Orlando Galdamez Guevara
This is a paragraph from one of my fellows.
There are some characteristics that I always look for in a good hotel. I care about the location, customer service, and hygiene. Finding a good hotel is not always easy and takes time to choose the correct one, because these three caracteristics are not always guaranteed when looking for one.
First of all, when traveling, we may sometimes encontunter unsafe places, especially if traveling alone. Therefore, it is important to book a hotel in downtown área that is easily accesible, and has good reviews. Places like mountains, farms or the outskirts of a city can be dificult to access if a medical emergenxy or any accident happen.
Another important characteristic is an excellent customer service. A huge and fancy hotel with poor customer service is overshadowed by a small and cozy hotel with an excellent service. Staying in a hotel means to enjoyed your time there and feeling at home, so guests should expect a good treatment since they are paying for the hotel’s services. If managers, secreatries or clerks treat guests badly, it is expected that they will not comeback, and the reputation of the hotel may be ruined.
Finally, hygiene is something no one should compromise. Even though a hotel may seem cheaper and like a good deal, it may lack proper hygiene. Even in well-known hotels, it is necesary to conduct cleanliness checks to make sure everything is clean, because you can contract an illness by being in contact with towels, soaps or bed sheets. It is recommended to bring yor own personal hygiene products and be on alert for insects, mold or odors that can cause harm. If you know of any hotels with those problems, do not stay there.
In conclusion, when looking for a hotel be aware of these characteristics and do not be swayed by secondhand opinions, advertising, or offers. Locations, customer service and hygiene are three of the most important characteristics of a good hotel.
Based on my peer's paragraph, I concluded it.
Ligia Amalia Vasquez Rafaelano
This is a paragraph from one of my peers:
The are some characteristics that I always look for in a good hotel. When I’m travelling and I need to stay at a hotel there are a few important features that I really need to have. The first one a big room. For me, <u>it’s</u> important the hotel room is spacious enough. I’ve stayed in some <u>hotels</u> where the room was too small, that made me feel claustrophobic. So that’s why I prefer big rooms. The second characteristic is a really good breakfast. For me, it’s one of the top things a Hotel should offer. I don’t like hotels where the food isn’t that good, so I always make sure to check the reviews of the hotel’s breakfast. So, for me, the main things that a hotel should are a big room and a good breakfast.
juan josevelazquez rincon
Carolina Echeverria
4 tips to have a coherent paragraph
Camilo Andrés Villegas Roche
This is a paragraph of one of my fellows: The are some characteristics that I always look for in a good hotel. When I’m travelling and I need to stay at a hotel there are a few important features that I really need to have. The first one a big room. For me, it’s important the hotel room is spacious enough. I’ve stayed in some hotels where the room was too small, that made me feel claustrophobic. So that’s why I prefer big rooms. The second characteristic is a really good breakfast. For me, it’s one of the top things a Hotel should offer. I don’t like hotels where the food isn’t that good, so I always make sure to check the reviews of the hotel’s breakfast. So, for me, the main things that a hotel should are a big room and a good breakfast.
The Key noun is "hotel" and it is repeated 7 Times.
I've choose as consistent pronoun "I" because the main topic is about what that person look for when reserving at a hotel so "I" and "me" are repeated 13 times.
The transition signals could have been a little bit more used, I could only find "so" and "The first" this is I think a mistake I had in my paragraph also.
And finally the points are logically well placed, I can read this paragraph and find it very coherent.
Juan Manuel McCanchow
· Computers are useful is many ways
1. The computer helps to work more easy
2. It gives many ways to being interconnected
3. It helps to receive important information
4. It is very useful tool for security is buildings
5. It helps to play videogames.
Alejandro Zuñiga Saavedra
Coherence.
Practice:
Read one of your fellow student’s paragraph from the previous class on unity, and identify these four tips we learned in this class.
There are some characteristics that I always look for in a good hotel.
When choosing a hotel, there are several characteristics I always look for to ensure a pleasant stay**. First**, the main characteristic is the cleaning, above all in the bathrooms, bedrooms, and other areas. Second, I always see that the Hotel has a good location, I prefer hotels that are conveniently located near attractions, shopping centers, supermarkets, and public transportation. Additionally, good customer service is important, friendly and helpful staff can greatly enhance the experience. Comfortable amenities, such as a cozy bed, high-quality toiletries, and reliable Wi-Fi, are also essential for a relaxing stay. I also appreciate hotels that offer complimentary breakfast, as it adds value and convenience to my stay. Lastly, safety features, like secure locks and well-lit hallways, give me peace of mind, I also always ask if the different services are active all night.
- First tip: the words hotel and hotels were repeated four times.
- Second tip: The pronoun “I” five times were used.
- Third tip: five transition signals were used.
- Fourth tip: four points logically were used.
Jazmín Hernández Estrada
4 tips to have a coherent paragraph:
Madison Eduardo Herrera Carrión
Credits to Jose Diego Alvarez Paredes
Computers are useful in many ways. They are key for almost every profession nowadays. The connection between coworkers and friends is one of the main usage computers offer us. At present, most part of the data is stored in computers, it includes both hard drive or solid-state drive and cloud storage. Not to mention the gigantic number of tasks in which computers save us a lot of time such as calculating data in spreadsheets, editing videos and images, making presentations, and so on. I am only mentioning the basic ones but there are literally thousands of uses where computers are fundamental. Now more than ever, with the evolution of the artificial intelligence, it is mandatory to know how to use a computer and take advantage of this amazing tool.
1. Key nouns: 6
2. Consistent pronouns: 2
3. Transition signals: 3
4. Organizing the points logically: the first reason of computers’ usefulness is accurate developed, which is connection between coworkers and friends. However, there is not a clear and well-develop second point because he gave us characteristics on the hardware and software, but it is not completely delved into these aspects with examples and explanations. Overall, it is a good paragraph. Keep the good job!
Jennyffer Paola Monroy Alarcon
Credits to Christian Isturiz:
Sofia Ortiz Trujillo
Computers are useful in many ways. For example, they are such a great tool for students, with a computer a student can write docs, design slides for a presentation and search information for a task. Nowadays, also the computers are a powerful tool for working, if you have internet connection it’s easy to connect with coworkers, chat with them througout different platforms and so on.
Alejandro Argüello
Key nouns Computers=2 times Consistent Pronouns They=1
Luz Amparo Basante
KEY NOUNS Driving: It appears 6 times in the paragraph
CONSISTENT PRONOUNS There isn't in the paragraph
TRANSITION SIGNALS As, For example, Therefore, In conclusion
Kevin Fiorentino
Everybody has a cell phone, it’s almost a physiologic necessity for humans. When we buy a new cell phone, we find more internal memory or new functionalities to improve the previous one. People usually change his cell phone every 2 years, on average. Another motivation to change our cell phone is social status. Companies such as Apple releases a new iPhone every year and their fans buy it without doubt. It’s a religious for them to get the new version of the same cell phone. In conclusion, the behavior of the humans change since we use cell phones and every day we find new ways to use it.