Estructura y Redacción de Textos Argumentativos

Curso de Inglés Avanzado C1: Comunicación Persuasiva y Efectiva

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Estructura y Redacción de Textos Argumentativos

Curso de Inglés Avanzado C1: Comunicación Persuasiva y Efectiva

Clase 18 de 20

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Dominar la estructura de un texto argumentativo es una habilidad fundamental tanto en el ámbito académico como profesional. Saber organizar tus ideas, presentar una postura sólida y respaldarla con evidencia marca la diferencia entre un texto convincente y uno que pierde al lector en el camino.

¿Qué es un thesis statement y por qué es esencial?

Antes de escribir, necesitas planificar cuántos argumentos incluirás y cómo los organizarás de forma lógica para que el lector te siga sin esfuerzo. Todo texto argumentativo comienza con una introducción que explica el tema, ofrece el contexto necesario y presenta tu posición.

Dentro de esa introducción siempre debe aparecer un thesis statement [01:07]. Se trata de una sola oración que presenta la idea principal de todo tu texto. Es la parte más importante porque prepara al lector y genera el interés necesario para que continúe leyendo.

Algunos ejemplos de thesis statements son:

Fostering workplace diversity boosts productivity and innovation in global business landscape [01:42].
Adapting to technological advancements is crucial for success in the modern workplace [02:01].

Cada uno deja claro el tema y la postura del autor desde el primer momento.

¿Cuáles son los dos métodos para escribir tu thesis statement?

Existen dos formas principales de desarrollar tu thesis statement: el método de refutación y el método de puntos principales [02:19].

¿Cómo funciona el refutation method?

En el refutation method [02:27], presentas tu thesis statement en el primer párrafo y en el segundo introduces una idea que se opone a tu postura inicial. ¿Por qué? Porque en los párrafos tercero y cuarto vas a construir argumentos que respalden tu idea original usando hechos y evidencia. Esta técnica fortalece tu posición al mostrar que conoces el argumento contrario y aun así lo superas.

Un ejemplo de refutación sería: "While some argue that prioritizing work can lead to career success, it's crucial to consider the drawbacks such as burnout and strained relationships" [03:09].

¿Qué caracteriza al main points method?

El main points method [03:34] es más directo. Le ofrece al lector un panorama claro de los puntos que abordarás y, al mismo tiempo, te da un esquema que puedes seguir al redactar. Puedes dividirlo en tres o cuatro partes según la cantidad de ideas. Por ejemplo:

Primera idea: "In today's fast-paced world, finding the right balance between work and life has become increasingly important" [04:04].
Segunda idea: "Striking this balance is crucial for overall well-being" [04:16].
Tercera idea: "We will explore the significance of work-life balance and discuss practical strategies" [04:22].

¿Cómo se construyen los párrafos del cuerpo y la conclusión?

Una vez lista la introducción, el siguiente paso son los párrafos del cuerpo (main body paragraphs) [04:36]. Pueden ser tres o cuatro, y cada uno debe iniciar con una topic sentence que indique al lector qué esperar. Cada párrafo desarrolla un solo argumento respaldado con hechos, estadísticas y ejemplos.

Para conectar tus ideas, utiliza frases de comparación, contraste y reformulación [05:05]. También es clave considerar varios aspectos antes de escribir:

Ten un esquema claro de lo que quieres incluir.
Investiga para que tu información sea precisa.
Conoce el límite de palabras si se trata de un texto académico.
Identifica a tu lector: elige vocabulario y frases que conecten con esa audiencia [05:40].

Finalmente, la conclusión se escribe en un solo párrafo [05:55]. Debe retomar el thesis statement inicial y resumir los argumentos más relevantes sin introducir información nueva. Un recurso poderoso es apelar a las emociones del lector, explicando cómo el tema te ha afectado personalmente [06:16].

Ahora que conoces cada elemento de esta estructura, el mejor paso es ponerla en práctica: elige un tema, redacta tu thesis statement y construye tu texto argumentativo completo. ¿Qué método vas a usar, refutación o puntos principales?

Cristian Camilo Bulla Murcia

Hace un año

Here's my introduction:

The Barcelona Apartment Hunt: A Trial of Patience, Strategy, and Luck

How many times have you had to find a new home? The process is difficult and complex. Even with a meticolous plan to cover an specific area, suceess is never certain. Soaring demand can make that the houses prices increase, and countless competitors can snatch opportunities away before you even have a chance to view them. This is not hypothetic, it is a daily reality for anyone searching for an apartment in Barcelona. Here, finding a home is less a simple transaction and more a hard test of perseverance.

Cristian Camilo Bulla Murcia

Hace un año

One of the main reasons for searching an apartment in Barcelona is notoriously complicated is because the imbalance between supply and demand, which has driven prices to historic highs. The Price for square meter has became a problem for tenants, reflecting a dramatic 17.49% yer-on-year increase. This is following by a shortage of available housing; only 2.800 new units completed in 2024 against the estimated anual demand of 15000 units. Consequently, many properties under €800, receive multiple offers within hours of listing, becoming in a battlefield for tenants.

Cristian Camilo Bulla Murcia

Hace un año

An this is the full text:

The Barcelona Apartment Hunt: A Trial of Patience, Strategy, and Luck

How many times have you had to find a new home? The process is difficult and complex. Even with a meticulous plan to cover a specific area, success is never certain. Soaring demand can make house prices increase, and countless competitors can snatch opportunities away before you even have a chance to view them. This is not hypothetical, it is a daily reality for anyone searching for an apartment in Barcelona. Here, finding a home is less a simple transaction and more a hard test of perseverance.

One of the main reasons for searching for an apartment in Barcelona is notoriously complicated, is because of the imbalance between supply and demand, which has driven prices to historic highs. The Price for square meters has become a problem for tenants, reflecting a dramatic 17.49% year-on-year increase. This is followed by a shortage of available housing; only 2.800 new units completed in 2024 against the estimated annual demand of 15000 units. Consequently, many properties under €800, receive multiple offers within hours of listing, becoming a battlefield for tenants.

Searching for an apartment needs a plan with all the variables covered and time, at least 3 months before you are moving. Concentrate on web platforms like Idealista, spotahome or even Facebook, specify the neighborhood you want to live in and your realistic budget, considering administration fees, the deposit, the pay for 1 month of the rent and stay focus on the monthly services if those are included or not. Don’t hesitate to set an appointment to visit the place and ask all the questions needed. These tips can help you with your search.

In summary, finding a new home is difficult in Barcelona, the imbalance between supply and demand and the increasing quantity of people waiting for a place makes the searching more difficult. If you really want to move Barcelona, you need a plan and be patient because it is a hard task. You have to stay focused and set alarms for new flats and be able to visit.

Comentarios (12)12 comentarios

Humberto Guardado

Hace 2 años

JESSICA ORTIZ OSPINA

In this essay, I want to explore the importance of evaluating our habits not only for our style of life but also for our professional productivity, how to achieve our goals, and to have control of our life and not leave bad habits in government our life.

There is a very interesting book that deals with this topic. The book called Atomic Habits by James Clear’s explores how small, consistent actions can lead to significant personal and professional growth. This approach can be compared to the gradual build-up of compound interest, where small deposits eventually lead to significant wealth.

Clear introduces the concept of the 1% improvement rule, wich highlights how making small changes dayli can lead to remarkable results. For instance, If you improve by just 1% each day, you will be thirty-seven times better after a year. Similarly, a slight change in trajectory can lead a plane to and entirely different destination. In the same way, adopting small, positive habits can drastically alter your life’s direction over time.

In conclusion, Atomic habits offers the methos and convince to take a consisten hahits to achieve significant change. These small habits provide a sustainable and effective path ro reaching our goals and also ensures enduring transformation

Christian Pedraza

Hi Jessica, thank you for sharing. I found your essay very interesting and helpful.

Pablo Lezama

People think that the sport bets are not a problem for you society. In the last years, since 2010 approximately, they are a boom with the growth of social media and the internet. Further of that, the big problem of sport bets is that there are many illegal sites when one can bet.

Recently, many news about this topic are appearing. This is because children bet in your parent's place. That's dengerous. The habit of betting at the teens stage is an important problem to deal with.

This illegal sites create the perfect place to involve every mental weak people. The teens are in a challenging moment of their life. This moment is important for your future and there is when the bad people take advantage of it.

According to a study, in the last 5 years more than one thousend teenagers are in depression for the bets in Mendoza. The number is growing. It's time to act. No all have a strong family where take refuge.

If you have a chaild, brother or sister, even a friend, you have to help. It's your duty. They need us.

Gabriel Obregón

Steps to consider before writing

Plan your content:
- Decide on the number of arguments you will present.
- Make sure your text is clear and logical so readers can easily understand and follow your points.

Structure of an argumentative text

Introduction:
- Purpose: Explain the topic, provide background information, and state your position.
- Thesis statement: Include a one-sentence statement that presents the main idea of your text. This is crucial for capturing the reader's interest.
- Examples of thesis statements:
  - "Fostering workplace diversity boosts productivity and innovation in the global business landscape."
  - "Adapting to technological advancements is crucial for success in the ever-evolving modern workplace."
Methods to write a thesis statement:
- Refutation method:
  - Start with your thesis statement in the first paragraph.
  - In the second paragraph, present an opposing idea.
  - In the third and fourth paragraphs, provide arguments that support your initial idea using facts and evidence.
  - Example: "While some argue that prioritizing work can lead to career success, it's crucial to consider the drawbacks, such as burnout and strained relationships."
- Main points method:
  - Clearly outline the points you will cover in your text.
  - Example:
    - "In today's fast-paced world, finding the right balance between work and life has become increasingly important."
    - "Striking this balance is crucial for overall well-being."
    - "In this essay, we will explore the significance of work-life balance and discuss practical strategies."
Main body paragraphs:
- Write three or four paragraphs, each focusing on a different argument.
- Include a topic sentence in each paragraph to guide the reader.
- Use facts, statistics, and examples to support your points.
Useful vocabulary and phrases:
- Use phrases to organize information, give examples, close ideas, or oppose them.
- Refer to the worksheet in the resources section for additional phrases.

Important considerations

Punctuation and clarity: Use correct punctuation and maintain a clear outline of your ideas.
Research and word count: Conduct research to ensure accurate information. Be mindful of any word limits.
Audience awareness: Know who will read your text and choose words and phrases that connect with them.

Conclusion:
- Restate your thesis statement.
- Summarize the key arguments without introducing new information.
- Optionally, appeal to the reader's emotions by explaining how the topic has affected you.
- Example: "In this essay, we explored the significance of work-life balance and discussed practical strategies to achieve harmony between our professional and personal lives. In my experience..." (Share a personal insight.)

Alvaro Andrés Espitia Varón

Hace 3 años

Many people have said that the remote work is th future and principal way of interaction between employers and employees, however, it´s very important to consider the pros and cons of each work mode, in order to achieve the proper balance amid reaching the primary business objectives en terms of financial, administrative, business social accountability, among other previously goals established by the management, and the right employees´s right work- balance in relation to the sinergy within the facts earlier mentioned.

In the pursuit of work-life balance, it is crucial to cherish the moments dedicated to family, friends, and personal activities. These moments represent the heart of a fulfilling life beyond the workplace. Time invested in nurturing relationships and engaging in personal pursuits not only rejuvenates the spirit but also fosters a sense of joy and contentment. Prioritizing these aspects contributes significantly to overall well-being, providing a necessary counterbalance to the demands of a busy professional life. Recognizing and valuing the moments spent with loved ones and in personal activities is fundamental to cultivating a life that is not only successful in a career but also rich in meaningful connections and personal fulfillment.

In this essay, we explored the significance of work-life balance and discussed practical strategies to achieve harmony between our professional and personal lives. In my experience, increasing the time I spend on myself with reading and sports, has improved my stress and overall health condition. Therefore, I can conclude that the exploration of work-life balance highlights its profound significance in our lives. As we have examined the various aspects of this delicate equilibrium, it becomes evident that prioritizing both our professional and personal fields will help us improve our quality of life and overall performance at home and at work.

Orlando Galdamez Guevara

Hace un mes•editado

HOW AI IS CHANGING EVERYTHING AROUND US.

Introduction

AI has slightly changed how people interact with each other; nevertheless, most people still aren’t aware of this. We have been adapting to the new technology as if it were inevitable, and it’s just one of the main reasons why we can lose out along the way.

What I mean to say is that, although handling and living with AI will be necessary in the near future, we must bear in mind that this can bring negative consequences, and be ready to face them in order to help us stay focused on what really contributes to development.

On the other hand, AI is not only making everything more accessible but is also helping us develop new abilities; this will depend on how we handle it.

This revolutionary technology is becoming part of our daily lives, which is similar to previous transformations that the world has gone through at other times.

Conclusion

AI is not something we can simply refuse to use because everything is being created based on it, so people must just adapt and use it with awareness and wisdom.

Daniel Gómez Segovia

Hace 7 meses

The recent conflict in the Middle East between Iran, USA, Israel and Persian Gulf states will increase the cost of living in the entire world, mainly due to rising prices in oil and gas. The war is developing in a key region for production and exports of oil and gas, with estimates about 20% of oil and 30% of worldwide production and traffic. The Persian Gulf geographic characteristics worsen the situation due to all the maritime traffic that comes through the Strait of Hormuz, a tiny strip of sea of a few kilometers that can be controlled or blocked by Iran, the attacked country.

Due to high risk of attack on vessels, insurance companies cancelled all the policies for the ships that cross the Hormuz strait. This has led to a cancellation of all oil and LNG freights since the beginning of the war until today. The markets have quickly responded to that with peaks in oil and gas prices not seen since the 2020 pandemic crisis.

In addition, Iran has been heavily attacked by USA, Israel and other countries simultaneously, but it still preserves a strong military infrastructure based on multiple rocket launchers scattered across the entire country that is actively operating, targeting objectives in Israel and multiples Gulf countries. Right now, those attacks have reached an oil refinery in Saudi Arabia and an LNG plant in Qatar, so those sites have been forced to stop their operations.

Furthermore, the end of the war is uncertain. The situation is escalating day by day and despite some key objectives have been achieved, some time will be required to dismantle all of Iran's military infrastructure and institutions, with representatives of USA saying it would last one month according to initial and optimistic estimates. Meanwhile, Iran will continue threatening military and civil targets across the gulf and the oil and gas traffic will be restrained surely. If a solution is not found to reopen the maritime traffic again, there will be hard days for the global economy, so dependent on oil and gas for the production chain of almost all its factories.

In conclusion, I think there will be an increase in the cost of living in the entire world, higher in non-oil-and-gas-producer countries and this will cause some restraints in the economic growth. However, if this war ends soon, the economic recovery can be quick and the prices can lower as quickly as they rose.

Luis Renato Cabañas Rodríguez

Hace 8 meses

THE IMPORTANCE TO USE GLASSES WITH UV RAYS FILTER PROTECTION

The sun is the main source of energy for the living beings. Then is correct to say that we can not to get rid of the sunlight.

Nevetheless the constant exposure to UV rays that come with the sunlight, couls cause serious harma to our skin and eyes.

About this last, the damages could be outside the eye, but mainly inside the eye.

In this essay will be afforded the reasons why our eyes could be demaged, in its different structures, and at the same tiem, what we can do, to protect us effectivily.

The importance to protect our eyes from the UV rays of the sunlight using appropiate lenses. (Thesis statement).

Many people today think that the prologued exposure to sunlight is harmless and even healthy. Some on purpose do this to look tan and fashionable.

But this pratice could cause many harms to our skin, from a simple skin burn, to a definite skin cancer. For this reason a large number of lotions and creams , as a UV rays filters, created to prevent this kind of potential skin harms.

But very few take into consideration, the important protection for our eyes, from the influence of the dangerous solar UV rays.

There are at least three categories of the UV rays family: UVA, UVB, and UVC. this last one are the most dangerous; the letter C in UVC, stands for Cancer, so this ones are the most carcinogenics, but are fortunately filtered by the atmospheric layers.

On the other hand UVB, even though are not as dangerous as UVC, are not effectivily filtered by atmospheric layers, and cause serious skin burns, especially when the people expose themselves in a prologued way to the sunlight, in the beach for example. The letter B in UVB stand for: Burn.

About the UVA rays are the least dangerous of the three for the skin but are still dangerous for the eyes, because the prolongued exposure to them could cause eye cataracs and pterygium which is a fleshy growths of the eye, as well as several retinal damages (internal harms).

Therefore it is necessary to protect our eyes using glasses (lenses) with UVA protection. They are mainly the called photocromic lenses (they turn dark by the sunlight stimulation) and the polarized (Light polarizer) lenses.

Even though this gadgets could prevent the potential harms of the eyes, they could not cure them. That´s the importance to prevent in time before it´s too late.

CONCLUSION

Our daily UV rays exposure could be potential dangerous for our skin and eyes. UVA, are the kind of rays that could cause more harm to our eyes, and because of that we need to protect our eyes from them, mainly using glasses with UV ray filters, like the called: photocromic lenses and polarized

Adriana Michelle Díaz Suarez

The impact of social media on mental health

Social media platforms like Facebook, Instagram, X, and others have become central to modern conversations and interactions, reflecting the profound impact of digitalization on society. However, have we ever considered what is truly happening in people's minds? Are the trends and challenges we follow on these platforms genuinely useful for our society, or do they merely promote superficiality? More importantly, what is the long-term impact of social media on our brains?

More importantly, we must address the broader issues tied to this phenomenon, such as the unrealistic beauty standards set by Instagram models, the spread of misinformation, the blind following of trends, the erosion of individuality, and the potential brain damage caused by excessive screen time.

Unrealistic Beauty Standards (Instagram Models and Beauty): Social media often glorifies unattainable beauty standards, primarily through influencers and filters, leading to issues like low self-esteem, body dissatisfaction, and increased rates of eating disorders, especially among young users.
Misinformation: The rapid spread of unverified information on social media platforms contributes to confusion, polarization, and harmful decision-making in society, particularly during crises like elections or health emergencies.
Blind Following of Trends: Social media thrives on viral trends and challenges, which often prioritize entertainment over meaningful engagement. This can result in users conforming without critical thinking, leading to a loss of authentic self-expression.
Erosion of Individuality: The constant pressure to fit in with curated online personas discourages creativity and diversity, as users often feel compelled to replicate popular styles, behaviors, or content to gain validation.
Prolonged exposure to screens, particularly through social media, has been shown to negatively impact brain function. Research from the Journal of Behavioral Addictions (2020) highlights that excessive screen time can lead to a reduction in gray matter density in critical areas of the brain responsible for decision-making, impulse control, and emotional regulation. This is especially concerning for adolescents, whose brains are still developing. The constant stimulation and rapid shifts in attention demanded by social media platforms further exacerbate this issue, potentially leading to decreased attention spans and cognitive fatigue over time.

In conclusion, these are the pressing issues our society is facing, affecting individuals from children to the elderly. From my own experience, I have struggled with eating disorders caused by unrealistic beauty standards, which made me believe I had the most horrendous body in the world. Currently, I am dealing with a phone obsession that is impacting my attention and focus on more important aspects of my life. I am not alone in this; many others face similar challenges, showing that these problems are widespread and affect us all in different ways.

Juan Manuel McCanchow

The Role of Artificial Intelligence in Transforming Education

Artificial Intelligence (AI) is revolutionizing various sectors of society, and education is no exception. As AI continues to evolve, its influence in the classroom grows more pronounced, offering unprecedented opportunities for both teachers and students. However, with these advancements come challenges, raising questions about the future role of educators and the balance between technology and human interaction in learning. This essay will explore how AI is transforming education, its potential benefits, and the ethical concerns that arise from its integration.

To begin with, AI has significantly improved personalized learning, one of the greatest innovations in modern education. By using sophisticated algorithms, AI can analyze a student's learning style, strengths, and weaknesses, creating tailor-made educational experiences. For instance, platforms like Khan Academy and Duolingo use AI-driven technologies to adapt lessons based on a learner’s progress, ensuring that no student is left behind. This level of customization is nearly impossible for human teachers to achieve on a large scale, making AI a valuable tool in bridging learning gaps.

Moreover, AI-powered tools have proven to be extremely efficient in automating administrative tasks, freeing up time for educators to focus on pedagogy. Routine activities such as grading assignments, tracking attendance, and even assessing progress can be delegated to intelligent systems. This not only reduces the workload on teachers but also minimizes human error. As a result, educators can devote more attention to mentoring students and providing individualized support.

While the benefits are apparent, the increasing reliance on AI in education does not come without concerns. One of the major challenges is the potential dehumanization of the learning process. Education, at its core, is not just about information transfer but also about fostering emotional intelligence, critical thinking, and interpersonal skills, which are difficult to impart through machines. Furthermore, there is a risk of widening the gap between those who have access to AI-powered learning tools and those who do not, exacerbating educational inequality.

Ethical considerations surrounding data privacy are also paramount. AI systems collect vast amounts of data on students, raising concerns about how this data is used and who has access to it. Without proper regulations and safeguards, there is a potential for misuse, such as profiling students based on their learning patterns or selling data to third-party companies. Therefore, robust ethical frameworks must be established to ensure that AI is used responsibly in educational settings.

In conclusion, while AI presents transformative potential in education by offering personalized learning experiences and alleviating administrative burdens, it is imperative to strike a balance between technological efficiency and human-centric education. Governments, educational institutions, and tech companies must collaborate to ensure equitable access to AI tools, address ethical concerns, and uphold the value of human interaction in learning. By doing so, we can harness the power of AI to enhance education while preserving the essential human elements that define the learning experience.

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