Writing a powerful conclusion
Clase 12 de 17 • Curso de Inglés Avanzado C1: Recursos Conversacionales y Lingüísticos
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Oscar Eduardo Chaparro Blancas
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Clase 12 de 17 • Curso de Inglés Avanzado C1: Recursos Conversacionales y Lingüísticos
Contenido del curso
Oscar Eduardo Chaparro Blancas
Santiago Tellez Hernandez
Felipe Bernardo González Barranco
Diana Florez
Felipe Bernardo González Barranco
Platzi Learning
Christian Isturiz
Felipe Bernardo González Barranco
Silvia Veronica Noriega
Guillermo Rosales Núñez
Ravee Lakhmani
Jeimy Nayeli Medrano Martinez
Ravee Lakhmani
Rebeca Janeth Melgar Barahona
Kelly Alexandra Romero Franco
Verónica Yamileth Lovo Campos
Miguel Eduardo Ardón Arévalo
Diana Nayeli Ayala Ramírez
Leonardo Daniel Gonzalez cruz
Darwin Ramirez
Brayan Daniel Orellana Chicas
Jorge Gabriel Guevara Portillo
Jorge Gabriel Guevara Portillo
Jorge Gabriel Guevara Portillo
Johan Arturo
I think the weight of the essays, chronicles or something written which exposes a thesis or a personal opinion is the conclusion. And most importantly, the conclusion has to be a clear reflection of our thoughts and beliefs. The research and the process of redaction and conjunction of ideas is important but, the way we finish gives us our own style and the verdict of the readers. We can be emphatic with them or disgusting. The conclusion is the best way to connect with the audience.
My essay
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Common mistakes!
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In a world where blue jays and raccoons can be friends with a white immortal gorilla and live the craziest adventures that a human mind can imagine, a bit of intrigue needs to arise in you, if not, give me some of what you and the writer of this series are taking. “Regular Show” is for many criticisms a cinematographic piece of art, that has marked and influenced the childhood of many people and as one of those, I can agree that this is the most creative animated series that has been ever created.
Regular Show Is a series of Mordecai and Rigby, a blue jay and a raccoon, respectively, who work for a park where the most absurd and fictitious things happen. With a bubble gum dispenser as a boss, an immortal albino gorilla as a coworker, a fat zombie who lives with a ghost in a trailer, and the park owner’s son as the “supervisor” with ahead of the size of a beach ball, nothing can go well. Now that you have an idea of what are we talking about, let’s focus on the plot and why is impossible to find inconsistencies in the story, even being so absurd. The regular show consists of 8 seasons, with about 20 episodes each, in which every single episode is a news story, where the park gets destroyed, they fly to the space to fight mystic babies, acquire superpowers or beat each other, but okay… you get me, weird things happen in that park. There’s another interesting fact about this series and that is that each new tale has a similarity, the structure of the events. First, they are having a civilized conversation as we humans tend to do, then some of the fictitious events mentioned before occur, third, the members of the park find a conflict to fight or argue over about, like that time Skips (the albino gorilla) killed Rigby in an arm wrestling game and had to beat the Death in an arm-wrestling match to resurrect the raccoon. And finally, they reconcile with each other, agree to be friends, just to find a new problem to fight about, and repeat that sequence over and over again. Moving on, now, you understand what type of characters and tales we are talking about, nonetheless, there are many negative and criticizable aspects of this cinematographic piece. One of them is the absurdness or hyperboles, a resource that many series apply to their stories to make it seem more attractive and entertaining, overused can be annoying for viewers and it’s something I find in regular shows. For instance, Money Heist is a Spanish series where several thieves rob the banks with the best security, every time the police are close to catching them, they make it look (in the most absurd way possible) like it was always part of the plan, this each of the 4 times they robbed. This being a crucial factor of “Regular Show” can be perceived as annoying and exhausting. Additionally, being a series with each episode a different story can make it hard to trap the viewer’s attention. Think about the show where you were the most invested in, it was probably something like Stranger Things, a series that combines absurd and real-life experiences that develops a plot that catches the attention of everyone, something we can't see on Regular Show.
To conclude, if you are the type of person who likes fictitious cinematographic plays, where they don’t follow a coherent tale, but the creativity of the writers creates absurd art that may not have you super invested but will give you an entertaining time, “Regular Show” a not regular series with humanized animals who fight mystic animals (kind off), is just for you.
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Never miss a chance in your essay and the conclusion isn't the exception
Why I got a bad score in the exam, if I answer: "It gives your reader something to think about" to the question: What is the benefit of including a question for your readers in your conclusion?" ?
Because the correct answer was "All the answers", When we include a question in our conclusion, we give the reader something to think about, but also it makes him/her remember the topic/work and gives a good impression. furthermore if you add a call to action with the question it will make the reader to feel part of the conversation.
Hello Silvia! It's because all answers are correct in that question.
how to write a powerful conclusion
Thanks for the comment Jeimi!
Star Wars Rebels: As a sequel to the Star Wars series Clone Wars, Lucasfilm creates a whole history about the first steps of the Rebels who fight against The Empire after the order 66, the series introduces us to The squadron Fenix, who is a cell of the raising Rebellion. "Rebels" is a poem about all of the magic things that we love about the Star Wars universe, badass moments, quite good development of the characters, and a new thing that blows up our minds with the story of the force and Jedi and Sith legacy. And is a good prequel to the events in A new hope, all of these stories match, and make sense in the canon. I have no complaints about, more than the weird nose of Ezra. 🌕🌕🌕🌕🌗
I think the weight of the essays, chronicles or something written which exposes a thesis or a personal opinion is the conclusion. And most importantly, the conclusion has to be a clear reflection of our thoughts and beliefs. The research and the process of redaction and conjunction of ideas is important but, the way we finish gives us our own style and the verdict of the readers. We can be emphatic with them or disgusting. The conclusion is the best way to connect with the audience.
I think the weight of the essays, chronicles or something written which exposes a thesis or a personal opinion is the conclusion. And most importantly, the conclusion has to be a clear reflection of our thoughts and beliefs. The research and the process of redaction and conjunction of ideas is important but, the way we finish gives us our own style and the verdict of the readers. We can be emphatic with them or disgusting. The conclusion is the best way to connect with the audience.
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my critical review of La hora del juicio - Canserbero
introduction
what should we do about the commercial and unconscious music? What kind of music do you want to listen to? What kind of music do you want your sons to listen to? In this song Canserbero will give what he thinks is a solution to the empty music and I will review what alternatives we have in addition to his solution.
evaluation:
- First the problem is not the music that the society listens to, the problem is the society itself, the solution is not only the music to change the society, but also we need other methods than the music, but the music helps as well of course.
- He mentioned an anecdote of a dream in which he suggests that he won’t do commercial music, because he wants to continue with what he had set out to do, which was to do conscious rap, but If he is aware of the problems of the society, there should be more leaders with the same level of consciousness that he could cooperate with, so there should be some artists and music furthermore his music not all the music is like the market music
- The other way to raise awareness is just with the message of his music, and the people little by little will start to change the social mentality
- Trying to go directly against the interest of so many people could be dangerous, so little by little he needs to create an evolution of the music, but not a destruction.
Conclusion:
What kind of music do you want your sons to listen to? or in other words, what kind of society do you want your sons to live in? Because the music is just a reflect of the society, we need to have music just for the art not just because the money, the art shouldn’t be a business as canserbero as an artist mentioned in this song , but we cant just change everything at once, we need a smooth change to do the things right, how? Showing to the people other kind of music, movies, folks etc and by this way we will have more diversity on the likes and the culture we have, not all the music will be centralized on a couple of genders or a couple of artists we will have different viewpoints of the life and the art, so what kind of music do you want to listen to?
el titulo suena bien
Never miss a chance in your essay and the conclusion isn’t the exception
Common mistakes!
Presenting new information. Repeating the thesis statement. Being apologetic. Ending with a quote. Rushing.
I think the weight of the essays, chronicles or something written which exposes a thesis or a personal opinion is the conclusion. And most importantly, the conclusion has to be a clear reflection of our thoughts and beliefs. The research and the process of redaction and conjunction of ideas is important but, the way we finish gives us our own style and the verdict of the readers. We can be emphatic with them or disgusting. The conclusion is the best way to connect with the audience.
I know that's no perfect but here is my essay:
We all need to eat, and beyond sustenance, we love food. But do we know how to eat? That's the question I've pondered since my late teens. My research has led me to multiple conclusions.
Firstly, some argue that we should focus solely on calories or macronutrients. But is that enough? If most of your food comes from whole, real sources, tracking calories and macronutrients might be beneficial. However, if you're unsure what's good or bad for you, it could lead to consuming more processed foods than you should.
There are more restrictive diets, like vegetarian or vegan lifestyles, often adopted for moral reasons rather than health benefits. While admirable, self-implemented dietary changes without professional guidance can cause severe illnesses or vitamin deficiencies.
To conclude, it might sound simple, but the key is something we all know: balance. Investigate what's good for you. If your principles are important, follow them, but always consult professionals. Now is your turn – so please tell me, what do you think?