Writing a descriptive essay
Clase 8 de 17 • Curso de Inglés Avanzado C1: Recursos Conversacionales y Lingüísticos
Contenido del curso
Clase 8 de 17 • Curso de Inglés Avanzado C1: Recursos Conversacionales y Lingüísticos
Contenido del curso
Francis Galeano
Roger Flores
Luis Tapia
Victor Rafael Lantigua Bello
Felipe Bernardo González Barranco
Jennifer Odalys Palacios Orellana
Abel Alexis Rivas Meza
Keila Alexandra Recinos Alfaro
Claudia Yanira Torres Merlos
Michael Gustavo Palencia Guevara
Santiago Tellez Hernandez
Roger Flores
Brayan Alexander Flores Mejía
Milton Adonay Ortíz Lemus
Paola Lisbeth Vasquez Alvarenga
MANUEL ENRIQUE ORELLANA LÓPEZ
Natalie Madaí Recinos Alfaro
Paola Michelle García Amaya
Kevin Ricardo Méndez Loza
Brandon Levi Montano García
María José Crespín Velásquez
Rodrigo Alberto Benítez García
Neidy Yessenia Renderos Molina
Jonathan Steven Guillén Hernández
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Wait, is that... "non inclusive language"? I only know that term because of its cryptocurrency-related usage lol 😄
Expressions to make your essay more coherent:
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Topic: Importance of a good physical condition
Physical fitness refers to the state of an individual's body. Those who are in good physical condition are able to perform various activities effectively and vigorously, avoiding injuries and with reduced energy expenditure. People who are in poor physical condition, on the other hand, feel tired soon after starting work, experiencing a progressive deterioration of their capacity and effectiveness.
It is important to have a good physical condition to be able to start tasks in both the physical and mental spheres, which must have greater skills to be able to perform them more effectively.
In conclusion, physical condition must be worked on in order to be able to perform daily tasks with more energy and thus be more efficient.
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Eating habits
Eating habits are the set of food substances that are ingested forming habits or nutritional behaviors for human beings and is part of their lifestyle.
However, not all people take care of their food, there are certain problems that occur due to bad habits that the person has, for example, not having an established schedule, excess or lack of food, among others; All this has great consequences on the health of people.
Some bad habits that some people have are: Not having fixed schedules for food intake. Eating a lot of fast food Drinking little water Going to bed after eating, etc. Therefore, if the person does not take care of his eating habits, he can present several physical and psychological problems, such as: depression, sleep problems, obesity, heart problems, among others.
In conclusion, eating habits are very important, as they allow us to have quality of life, not only physically, but also psychologically, so we must work on building good eating habits.
the pupusas
Pupusas are a typical dish from El Salvador. It could be said that the most popular ones are made of different ingredients, that is to your liking and of course you cannot miss their respective sauce and tanning.
El Salvador is recognized for its typical dish: the delicious pupusas. In any corner of the country you will find a diversity of options to taste a delicious breakfast, dinner Currently, traditional pupusas have cheese as their base flavor, combined with beans, squash, chipilín, mushrooms, spinach, paper, suckling pig and loroco. You can also opt for one-ingredient pupusas such as just cheese, beans or pork rinds.
In conclusion, this dish is one of the most important in El Salvador due to its flavor and its price, which is very accessible, since this price varies depending on the main ingredient.
gastromy of El salvador
What you will see in this comment is a brief summary of what gastronomy is in El Salvador, which you should read carefullyyour meals in a concept about gastronomy
The gastronomy of El Salvador is characterized by the fusion of three great cultures, the indigenous (Pipil and Lenca), the Spanish and with important contributions from Arab food. Salvadoran gastronomy is made mainly with ingredients of local origin,
especially corn, beans, rice, chicken, beef, pork, shellfish, some wild animals, dairy products, and many fruits and vegetables. Including drinks, one of the most prominent is coffee. A factor of Salvadoran gastronomy is a geographical location
Conclusions on gastronomy, healthy eating and sustainability.
Gastronomy is a multidisciplinary field and, therefore, it is necessary to put the different subjects in common to achieve an improvement in a sector that has a great impact on health, social welfare and sustainability.
The important points for me are:
Summary:
Choose a particular topic.
Collect information.
Make an outline.
Write a strong introduction.
Write body paragraphs.
Summarize your essay.
Make it coherent.
what is bitcoin?
introduction: The present work talks about the bitcoin cryptocurrency that is widely used in our country and the purpose of this work is for us to inform ourselves about it and give it good use.
Bitcoin is a virtual currency or a means of electronic exchange that is used to purchase products and services like any other currency.
But this currency is decentralized, that is to say that there is no authority or control entity that is responsible for its issuance and registration of its movements.
It consists of a cryptographic key that is associated with a virtual wallet, which discounts and receives payments
conclusion: This cryptocurrency is very useful and if you can give it many uses both to work or to save your money.
In this work I will talk about bitcoin is a cryptocurrency and payment system with no central bank or single administrator In principle, bitcoin users can transfer money to each other through a peer-to-peer network using free and open source software. Transactions are verified and cryptographically guarded by a decentralized network of volunteer nodes, which record account history in a public database known as a blockchain, and prevent double spending or counterfeiting of money. The nodes do not have to trust each other. them and their operation is coordinated through a consensus protocol and complex mathematical calculations. In exchange for such computationally expensive work, the bitcoin network protocol rewards verifying computers by creating new bitcoins. This work is known as bitcoin mining.
On June 9, 2021, El Salvador is the first country to legalize bitcoin as an official currency. The law went into effect on September 7. The implementation of the law has been met with protests and calls to make the currency optional, not mandatory. According to a survey by the Central American University, the majority of Salvadorans do not agree with the use of cryptocurrencies as legal tender, and a survey by the Center for Citizen Studies (CEC) showed that 91% of the country prefers the dollar over Bitcoin.
In conclusion, bitcoin can be a good alternative to physical money, but its economic stability is not guaranteed, in a good time in which the currency stabilizes, it is a good time to make transactions.
Interesting explanation. Now I can write essays on my topics of interest.
Hi, I'm Manuel. I thought the class was good because it talks about the activities we do in a job and preventing risk: The safety and hygiene standards are the normative instruments for the primary and secondary prevention of health in various activities at work. The main one of the safety and hygiene standards is to prevent accidents at work and any risk to the health of the worker.
bad eating habits Bad eating habits not only affect our health, but also our physical appearance and mood. Whenever we talk about healthy eating, we always mention the need to change our eating and exercise habits. In reality, a balanced diet includes all the foods distributed in the right proportions in order to sufficiently cover all the nutrient needs of our organism. The main dietary errors are: Drinking more soft drinks than water to quench thirst. Abusing 'light' or diet products. Snacking between meals to calm hunger, with an alteration in the rhythm and schedules of food. In conclusion, I believe that we have to take care of our health, as it is very important because if we abuse it too much, it can have consequences and lead to illnesses.
Why is it important to be in good physical condition? introduction It is important to maintain good health, since through exercise we can burn calories, and be able to maintain good blood circulation. Thanks to practicing exercise we can prevent diseases such as: diabetes, obesity, heart and cerebrovascular diseases. Since also with exercise stress is released and mood is improved, thus giving better performance. conclusion In conclusion we can say that if you exercise, we can have a better quality of life and health.
bad eating habits introduction: Whenever healthy eating is discussed, the need to change life habits in terms of eating and exercising is mentioned. conclusion: It does not take into account what nutrients are needed, how to distribute them in the different meals, etc. The fundamental purpose of eating is simply to kill hunger … or boredom, tiredness or stress. It is too easily forgotten that food is essential for the body to function properly and thus prevent numerous diseases, such as cardiovascular diseases, diabetes, osteoporosis, hypertension, hypercholesterolemia and many others that have their origin in excess or the deficiency of certain nutrients or the weakness of the immune system due to poor or insufficient nutrition. Even some types of cancer..
Topic:Malnutrition due to poor eating habits in young people.
Introduction: For years there have been increasing cases of malnutrition in young people due to the food they receive or other factors.
Here we will explain what the body needs in order to gain weight, skin color and how to maintain healthy eating habits.
Conclusion: We will explain the foods that can improve your health and physical appearance to reduce cases of malnutrition in young people and children.
Gastronomy in El Salvador
The Gastronomy is very important because it is what makes us a country with culture and makes us special in some ways.
Pupusas are our typical food that is corn dough or rice stuffed with cheese and beans or any other ingredient what makes pupusas special are the sauce, tanning and a natural juice.
Horchata is a natural juice of morro or coconut, its flavor makes it special and that is why it is one of the favorites of the Salvadoran people. The price is twenty five cents and sometimes thirty cents
Bitcoin: Bitcoin is a cryptocurrency and payment system with no central bank or single administrator. In principle, bitcoin users can transfer money to each other through a peer-to-peer network using free and open source software.
Bitcoin can bring many good things to El Salvador, such as facilitating micro transfers in stores, or not having to have physical money in the bags. this can reduce the rate of theft. On the other hand, its variable value could be detrimental at times, either for people who invest or for people who just want to have an alternative form of payment to the conventional one.
interesting topic in this class, helping us to better understand
a great explanation of how to write a descriptive essay, and the parts of it explaining why you have chosen the person or place you are going to describe