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Contenido del curso
David Ferney Plata Briceño
Esteban Guerrero Russi
Chris Edenfield
ANGELICA MARIA ACEVEDO OROZCO
Santiago Tellez Hernandez
Rafael Antonio Diaz Zuniga
Chris Edenfield
Diana Yasmín Sánchez Zelada
Daniel Burgos
Hafnya Andrea Mora Arroyo
Francis Araujo
Federico Missena
Juan Manuel McCanchow
Daniel Gómez Segovia
Ivette Alejandra Hernández Arías
alfredo antonio martinez albayero
Julián Cárdenas
Rommel Ivan Cadavid Barrios
Chris Edenfield
Alexander Jaber
Chris Edenfield
Alexander Jaber
Fransis Andrea Monroy Ramírez
Chris Edenfield
Elvis Ronald Cruz Chullo
Celeste Yamile
Luis Francisco Montero
Alfredo Argueta Interiano
Air travel is worthy for two main reasons, which are its speed whereby we can carry out our trips, and the security it offers when it comes to arriving safe and sound to our destinations. First and foremost, traveling by plane is largely more secure than, for example, traveling by train or bus. According to Worldwide Air Travel, the probability of an accident in a flight is 1 out of 1.6 millions, making thereby this transportation basis one of the most secure in the whole world; and, by the token, a feasible and reliable option for us and our families. Secondly, air travel allows us to set off on long distances around the world in very reduced spans of time; which otherwise could take us weeks if, for instance, we traveled by sailing. In the past, traveling to other places in the same continent would've taken us entire weeks, whilst traveling intercontinentally would have taken us even complete months. Fortunately, nowadays thank to air traveling we can conduct these same trips in less than eight or ten hours. Despite other problems like air-lag or cancelled flights - which are honestly inevitable - we may conclude that the disadvantages of air travel can't frankly outweigh the very convenient advantages such speed and security, which are two things that we always expect when traveling abroad.
Air travel could be worth it for many reasons, only if you are not panicking about heights. Nowadays traveling by plane is the fastest way to visit other cities or countries around the world. Many people are frightened before getting into a plane for the first time, but the chances of having an accident are pretty low. Compared to other transportation methods such as cars, air travel is much safer and more secure. In other words, having an accident on air travel is almost impossible. Nevertheless, if you are panicking about heights, you should be mentally prepared before traveling by plane for the first time. As a result, you'd have a great experience and would like to do it again and again.
Wonderful job using linking devices Esteban! And you bring up some really good points, like the fact that traveling by air is actually safer than other forms of transportation.
Well done!
Air travel is worthy for two main reasons, which are its speed whereby we can carry out our trips, and the security it offers when it comes to arriving safe and sound to our destinations. First and foremost, traveling by plane is largely more secure than, for example, traveling by train or bus. According to Worldwide Air Travel, the probability of an accident in a flight is 1 out of 1.6 millions, making thereby this transportation basis one of the most secure in the whole world; and, by the token, a feasible and reliable option for us and our families. Secondly, air travel allows us to set off on long distances around the world in very reduced spans of time; which otherwise could take us weeks if, for instance, we traveled by sailing. In the past, traveling to other places in the same continent would’ve taken us entire weeks, whilst traveling intercontinentally would have taken us even complete months. Fortunately, nowadays thank to air traveling we can conduct these same trips in less than eight or ten hours. Despite other problems like air-lag or cancelled flights - which are honestly inevitable - we may conclude that the disadvantages of air travel can’t frankly outweigh the very convenient advantages such speed and security, which are two things that we always expect when traveling abroad.
Very convinging arguments Rafael! Great use of the cohesive devices the help provide examples and demonstrate your point. Safety and speed are important advantages that flying has over other modes of transport.
Why is it better to reformulate arguments?
Reformulating acts as a strategic safety net for your communication. When you use phrases like in other words or put more simply, you are essentially giving your audience a second chance to grasp a difficult concept without making them feel lost. Imagine you are explaining a dense technical process or a heavy philosophical idea. The first explanation might be perfectly accurate but too academic. By pivoting with that is to say, you can translate your own point into everyday language. This dual-layered approach ensures that both the experts and the beginners in your audience stay engaged. It reinforces your core message, clears up any potential ambiguity, and makes your overall argument much more persuasive and accessible.
Definitely, air travel is worth it because you can go far away in less time compared to other transportation options. For example, if you are in Bogotá and you want to go to Guadalajara, it would take only five hours, which is the same amount of time it might take to go to Antioquia by car. Personally, air travel could be compared to using AI to do something complex that would take a lot of time without it.
Compared to other options, air travel is the fastest way to move between big distances, and by the same token, you can do more activites rather than be seated for 4x or 5x the time
The way I see it, air travel is actually worth it. It is well known that, when traveling by plane, you're bound to go through some issues such as having your luggage getting lost, or your flight being delayed, but even compared to traveling by bus or ship, going by airplane ends up being faster and more comfortable. Obviously, it may not be the same for everyone, taking into account liking and personal matters, that is to say, not everybody will prefer air travel over other means of transport.
Traveling is all about the destination, but what if you could enjoy it in a different way on your way to whatever business o pleasure awaits. Air traveling offers the experience of looking at astonishing landscapes from a different perspective. Therefore, it provides a unique experience comparted to our limited views when traveling by land.
By the same token, it's one of the most time effective ways to get to your destination. That being said, you could get to places that by no means are suitable for our limited time if traveling on vacations. At the same time, if traveling for business purposes, it's an effective way to cut deals or execute solutions that need physical presence.
In other words, air travel is the most efficient option. That being said, it might not be the best option in terms of pollution. Mother nature definitely will not agree with the carbon footprint that's seriously damaging the earth's ozone layer.
In the end, it's in your hands to decide if traveling by air justifies all the trouble and is the only way to meet your personal or business needs.
Is Air Travel Worth All the Trouble?
In today’s interconnected world, air travel has become a vital component of our global society. However, it often comes with a myriad of challenges, including long security lines, flight delays, and environmental concerns. Despite these inconveniences, I argue that the benefits of air travel—such as enhanced connectivity, the convenience of reaching distant destinations, and the cultural exchange it fosters—far outweigh the drawbacks.
Firstly, air travel offers unparalleled connectivity. In a matter of hours, one can traverse continents and oceans, connecting with family, friends, and colleagues across the globe. For instance, a business traveler can leave New York in the morning and arrive in London by afternoon, facilitating crucial meetings that drive international commerce. This level of connectivity is essential in our globalized economy, where collaboration across borders is increasingly necessary for success. Without air travel, many of these opportunities would be lost, stifling economic growth and innovation.
Moreover, the convenience of air travel cannot be overstated. While the process of getting through airports can be frustrating, the ability to cover vast distances quickly is a significant advantage. Consider the alternative: long road trips or extended train journeys that can take days. Air travel allows individuals to maximize their time, whether for business or leisure. For example, a family can spend a weekend in a different country, experiencing new cultures and cuisines, which would be nearly impossible without the efficiency of flying.
Cultural exchange is another vital aspect of air travel that enriches our lives. When people travel, they bring their customs, ideas, and perspectives to new places, fostering understanding and tolerance. This cultural interaction is invaluable in promoting peace and cooperation among nations. Personal experiences often highlight this point. During my travels, I have met individuals from diverse backgrounds, each sharing unique stories that have broadened my worldview. These interactions often lead to lasting friendships and a deeper appreciation for the richness of human experience.
However, it is essential to acknowledge the challenges associated with air travel. Issues such as flight delays, lost luggage, and the environmental impact of aviation are significant concerns. For instance, I once faced a six-hour delay due to weather conditions, which was incredibly frustrating. Yet, it was during this unexpected wait that I struck up a conversation with a fellow traveler, leading to a memorable exchange of ideas and experiences. This illustrates that even the inconveniences of air travel can sometimes yield unexpected benefits.
Furthermore, the environmental impact of air travel is a pressing issue that cannot be ignored. The aviation industry contributes to greenhouse gas emissions, prompting many to question the sustainability of frequent flying. However, it is important to recognize that advancements in technology are continually improving the efficiency of aircraft. Airlines are investing in more fuel-efficient planes and exploring alternative fuels, which can mitigate some of the environmental concerns associated with flying.
In conclusion, while air travel undoubtedly presents challenges, the advantages it offers in terms of connectivity, convenience, and cultural exchange make it a worthwhile endeavor. The ability to connect with others across the globe, the time saved compared to other forms of transportation, and the enriching experiences gained from travel are invaluable. As we navigate the complexities of modern life, air travel remains an essential tool that enhances our understanding of the world and fosters connections that transcend borders. Ultimately, the question is not whether air travel is worth the trouble, but rather how we can continue to improve the experience while minimizing its drawbacks.
I think air travel is worth all the trouble because there aren't many. Compared with ground travel, air travel is definitely faster, safer, and provides passengers with a more comfortable experience. Personally, if I had the money, I wouldn't trade air travel for ground travel.
In my opinion, air traveling is dangerous compared to car traveling, on the other hand, the view in a plane is so gorgeous but it's not a bad experience does although once time in the life
Is Air travel worth allthe trouble?
Well, is air travel is worth of course!
Travel air is, for me, the best mean of transportation! Take a trip to go to any part of the world became a came true dream for the humanity. Compared to another means of transportation, air travel the fastest, i guesss. By the same token, each one can arrive wichever place in any continen, rather than cars, bullet train, ships and submarine. Put more simply, anyone can be at any of the continent in one day or 24 hours. That is to say, for instance, that everybody can be in Sidney, China, Mexico, Italy and South Africa in a day. To illustrate more, it can turn around the world in 42 hours using, it´s up to the speed and kind of planes of course. Naturally, if anyone has enough money to achieve it. I´ve fortunately traveled by plane and tha´s why, I believe, it is an amazing experience! I personally think over about how many people is losing this all senses experience.
the end is coming
Air travel has more advantages than other modes of transportation. For example, you can experience a lot of things on an airplane that you can't when traveling by car or train. One of the biggest advantages is the time savings for long distances. For Illustrate, a flight from Colombia to Bogotá takes only 1 hour, compared to an 8-hour car ride. I personally prefer to save time whenever possible. Another advantage of air travel is that it allows you to see cities from a different perspective, such as big mountains, rivers, and the beauty of the sky. It Definitly enhances your enjoyment of the country's geography. The problems traveling by air are few, for example sometimes you have to wait on the airport for climate problemes, o you have to take care of the documents, for instance, passport or health certifications. Clearly, air travel worth all the trouble.
Nice work linking your ideas together and a great job providing relevant examples to back up your argument. Just a couple of minor corrections To illustrate instead of "for illustrate" The problems with traveling by air are few...
When I use " in other words" I will explaining something to someone.
Exactly! "In other words" is a phrase you can use before you explain something again using different words.
Thank you teacher.
Nice job Fransis!
++EXEMPLIFICATION++ Climate change is causing society to make alternative decisions regarding energy consumption *** For example, for instance, to ilustrate *** Mani people are switching from traditional gas-powered vehicles to hybrid or EV models
++REFORMULATION++ In other words Put more simply That is to say
++COMPARISON++ compared to by the same token
Thanks :)
Developing complex arguments.
Honestly, if all the preparation required to travel by plane is worth it, to illustrate, it’s safer than traveling by car or boat, according to accident statistics from different means of transport, you are less likely to have an air crash than on land or offshore; also, the travel time is reduced considerably which makes it more efficient for work or business matters. In my case, I prefer to travel by plane when I am traveling far away rather than by land, because it saves me 6 hours of travel and so I get to know more places.