Write an Email Task: Tips and Rubric
Clase 12 de 15 • Curso de Preparación para el Examen TOEFL
Contenido del curso
Clase 12 de 15 • Curso de Preparación para el Examen TOEFL
Contenido del curso
Alejandro Naranjo
Humberto Estrada Spiller
Abel Angel Garcia Diaz
Roxana Escobar Granados
José Daniel Calle Briceño
Melissa Reyes
Nicolas Vasquez Ariza
Hazel Abigail Figueroa Cortes
Abel Angel Garcia Diaz
David Martinez Granados
Abel Angel Garcia Diaz
Marcelo Puebla
Andrea Castillo
Dear editor,
I hope this message finds you well. The new poetry magazine is wonderful and I love how this kind of cultural enrichment initiatives are made. I specially like the variety of poems and the wide topics that they cover. I am writing this message because I decided to submit two of my poems thought the online submission form but I had a problem using it in the form and I am not sure if it was submitted. I wanted to ask you about the status of my submission and make sure if it was succeed or not. I hope to hear from you soon and thank you.
Best regards.
Here is my contribution to the class: "Write an email” task.
To:
Subject: Problem using submission form
Dear Editor,
I hope this message finds you well.
My name is Humberto, and I’m impressed by the amazing poems you’ve recently published in your new magazine. That’s why I decided to submit a couple of poems that I would like you to consider for your next publications. However, when I was trying to confirm the online submission form, it got stuck and displayed an error message.
I’d be grateful if you could provide any updates or guidance regarding my submission.
Waiting for your reply.
Kind regards,
Humberto.
Feel free to make any suggestions you think could help me.
To:
Subject: Problem using submission form
Dear Sir:
I’m thankful that your new magazine is asking readers to submit their poetry.
Consequently, I decided to submit two of my best poems for your consideration.
However, I encountered an issue with your online submission form, and I'm not sure my submission was received. While filling out the form, I was suddenly disconnected from your system.
Please kindly confirm that you have received my submission.
Awaiting your reply,
Yours sincerely
****
Abel Garcia Diaz
Dear editor,
I hope this message finds you well. The new poetry magazine is wonderful and I love how this kind of cultural enrichment initiatives are made. I specially like the variety of poems and the wide topics that they cover. I am writing this message because I decided to submit two of my poems thought the online submission form but I had a problem using it in the form and I am not sure if it was submitted. I wanted to ask you about the status of my submission and make sure if it was succeed or not. I hope to hear from you soon and thank you.
Best regards.
To:
Subject: Problem using submission form
Good morning Sunshine Poetry Megazine Team, i've always loved your work. I don't miss any delivery every month. The last megazine was particularly interesting for me because you talked about a writer who was born in my natal city.
I write to you because de web form for sending poems shows some errors to me. Every time I try to submit the form, it appears to not respond. It got stuck every time, and I'm not sure if you have recieved my poems.
I'd like to get information about my submitions or get instructions of how to use the form correctly.
Thank you very much.
JD.
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Dear Sunshine Poetry Magazine Team,
I have always loved your work, and I never miss an issue. The last magazine was particularly interesting to me because it featured a writer from my hometown.
I am writing because the web form for submitting poems seems to have an issue. Every time I try to submit my work, the form does not respond and gets stuck. As a result, I am not sure whether my poems were successfully received.
Could you please confirm the status of my submissions or provide instructions on how to use the form correctly?
Thank you very much for your time and assistance.
Sincerely, JD
To:
Subject: Problem using this submission form
Dear editor...
Today I was checking the new magazine that your company published, I completely love it, but there are some problems that I saw in the grammar, I hope that my intermission will take a good look. But you will consider to make poetry about something new, got a new material.
All yours.
Melissa.
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Subject: Problem using submission form
Dear Editor,
My name is Nicolas, and I recently discovered your magazine. I really admire its fresh style and the variety of poetic voices you showcase.
I tried to submit two poems through your online form, but the page froze after I clicked submit, and I did not receive any confirmation.
Could you please let me know if my submissions were received? If not, I would be glad to resend them.
Thank you for your help.
Kind regards, Nicolas
To:
Subject: Problem using submission form
Dear editor:
I hope you are doing well!
I want to express how much I love this new magazine and how grateful I am to be a part of this group. Your magazine has made me feel more confident about sharing my work.
I finished my poem, and I decided to submit it yesterday, but I had a certain issue in the online submission form. The online form doesn't work properly, and I am not sure if you received my submission. Please let me know if you have it or not. I will be waiting.
Thank you in advance.
Best regards
Ms. Figueroa
Where are the resources of the class(es) please. very simple question.
Hi Abel Angel! I understand it can be frustrating when you're looking for extra materials and aren't sure where to click.
You can find the rubrics and practice materials in the Class Resources section, which is typically located on the sidebar or the main dashboard of your course interface. This area is specifically designed to house the supplementary documents mentioned in the lessons.
If you are looking to further strengthen your writing skills, I recommend checking out:
These will help you build on the foundational skills you're currently practicing!
To: Subject: Problem using submission form
Body: Dear editor,
I hope this email finds you well,
First of, I would like to recognize the quality and content of sunshine poetry magazine poems. I find myself reading them endlessly and I always look forward to the next release.
Recently I've submitted two of my poems as part of your iniciative to let readers contribute, however, I had trouble with the submission form in your website and there wasn't any confirmation message that the poems were uploaded.
I wanted to confirm that you received the two poems in your end. I would love for you guys to read them through and if there's a chance, publish them. Let me know if I should fill the form again or even send them in a separate email.
Looking forward to your response.
Best,
David
To:
Subject: Problem using submission form
Dear Sir:
I’m thankful that your new magazine is asking readers to submit their poetry.
Consequently, I decided to submit two of my best poems for your consideration.
However, I encountered an issue with your online submission form, and I'm not sure my submission was received. While filling out the form, I was suddenly disconnected from your system.
Please kindly confirm that you have received my submission.
Awaiting your reply,
Yours sincerely
****
Abel Garcia Diaz
To:
Subject: Problem using submission form
Hello,
My name is Marcelo and I'm a big fan of the new poetry magazine. I really love the opportunities that you're giving to all of your readers to show their poems.
I tried to submit my poem but I had problems with that, the form didn't show any confirmation message, so I don't know if you have received it.
Could you please tell me please the status of my submission?
I look forward to your reply.
Best regards, Marcelo.
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Subject: Problem using submission form
Hello,
I’m a fanatic of poetry, firts that all, I want to say you: Congratulations! Because your magazine it’s excellent.
I wan to particepite in your annoucent with two poems of my authory, but I have problems with online submission form, I’m not sure if my work it’s correct uploan.
Could you check about the status of my submissions? I would really appreacited it
I’m be attent of your answer, thank you for your time.